Club 27

The edge of a knife
Between hell and heaven
Rode hard, put up wet
At age twenty-seven
‘Twas never in doubt 
Inspired, these artists
But those who fly high
Oft crash down the hardest
They wrestled their demons
In public displays
Poor young tortured souls
Awash in the praise
Surreal, making magic
While up on the stage
The young troubadours 
For a turbulent age
So much adulation
Could not ease the pain
Right there, in plain sight
They circled the drain
We raise up our heroes
Then cast them aside 
No consideration
No one to confide
Twenty-seven’s too young
For exiting doors
But sad though it is,
There’ll be plenty more…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Fowler Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 8:28 AM
Written with insight to the trials of many young artists. Very nicely penned Jeff. Linda
Wolf Avatar
August 28, 2022 at 8:58 PM
Oh! The magic age, 27: Hendrix, Joplin, Morrison, and more I'm sure... So tragic. Such a waste of talent. How Elvis made it to 42 only God knows.
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August 28, 2022 at 9:13 AM
I'm afraid so, Jeff. You poem says so much about these "youngsters" who seemed to have no reason to live. I wonder how many more. The list is already too long.
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