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at times i see before me your eyes your lips so close within my reach-- all i need do is stretch a hand to almost touch you my pulse races breathless adrift am i into a reverie of daydreams that feel to me as real as real can be AP: 1st place 2022, Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on January 25, 2022 for contest ABSOLUTELY ANYTHING sponsored by SHREYA LN Originally posted on November 25, 2021

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M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/11/2022 4:50:00 PM

Wow.

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/12/2022 3:47:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, ML ~

Panagiota Romios

Date: 12/23/2021 7:12:00 PM

I love p oems like this, I can relate to. Smashing write! Pangie xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/29/2021 12:25:00 PM

Thank you very much, Panagiota ~ much appreciated

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/5/2021 11:48:00 AM

Poignant and beautiful, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 12/5/2021 5:25:00 PM

Thank you very much, Andrea ~

Mike Gentile

Date: 11/27/2021 5:26:00 AM

So beautiful are these words Line! For me, I am feeling this as a loved one, no longer with us physically but with us none the less! Hope you are well xxoo

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/28/2021 5:50:00 AM

Thank you very much, Mike. Most appreciated ~

James Marshall Goff

Date: 11/27/2021 5:12:00 AM

Life is but a drip on our journey in God's Love, Line, seen and unseen our loved ones will join us in His Glory...great poem!

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/28/2021 5:50:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely comment, James ~

L Milton Hankins

Date: 11/25/2021 6:45:00 PM

Really fine lines, Lines, full of poignancy. And, I sense a hope in your heart for what is just a bit out of reach.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/28/2021 5:50:00 AM

Thank you, Milton ~ much appreciated.