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Not pretty, but kind He wouldn't mind She read his ~ And closed her blind

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Indiana Shaw

Date: 8/29/2021 12:02:00 AM

What a corker, brilliant, Gershon, ha, ha, ha . . . ; )

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/27/2021 2:59:00 PM

LOL…she was not a fan of his gawking!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/27/2021 3:47:00 PM

Nope. Not exactly a fan, was she?! lol. Thanks, Kim

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/27/2021 11:04:00 AM

Few words with much said. How do you do it????? "Wonderful" Have a great/blessed day writing away with few words...................

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/27/2021 3:51:00 PM

I do it with a pen and 1/2 a brain. Think if I had a whole brain. My pen might even be dangers... Thanks, Paula!

Mike Gentile

Date: 8/26/2021 4:56:00 AM

Seductively scintillating!!! Clever GW!!!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/26/2021 5:48:00 PM

Wow! Only two words in this comment, but really 'sssssmoked,' Mike. Thanks, gw

L Milton Hankins

Date: 8/25/2021 8:04:00 PM

(chuckling) I wish I were so gifted at putting an entire story into four lines like you do.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/26/2021 5:20:00 PM

maybe if I use scissors, the lines'll be thinner. :P gw

Quoth Theraven

Date: 8/25/2021 8:01:00 PM

Gershon, I read this poem three times. Very clever what you've brought in write. -Richard

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/26/2021 5:19:00 PM

So, Richard, what are waiting for? The fourth time awaits you... that's when the deeper meaning is revealed. ~ gw