Close Call

Death whispered my name today,
a soft seductive coo in my ear.
Proceeding onward to invade my very soul;
And over my body,
I felt the creeping cold take hold.

I closed my eyes to join the dance,
the romance of the dead;
Leading me from what I used to be,
into where I'll spend eternity,
where waltzes will never end for me.
So Free.

The shout of loved ones slingshots me back.
Lying in a cold sweat,
awake and screaming,
perhaps I was just dreaming.
Perhaps if it were more than a whisper,
I would have answered deaths call,
after all.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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October 28, 2012 at 2:35 PM
Fabulous, I love it!
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October 28, 2012 at 3:12 PM
Thanks for reading and responding Theresa,some people fear death, but i like to write about it as its no big deal, we just pass from one level to the next beyond. Thanks again, regards, Carl,
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