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Close-Ups

If you get close enough to a butterfly it gets ugly, get close-up to any living thing and it turns ugly. Better to keep a distance, be satisfied with the big picture. When you kiss beautiful lips what do you look at? Better to imagine you are kissing a butterfly. Yes the intimacy of closeness is delightful, yet why at such moments de we secretly wish to close our eyes?

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Date: 9/12/2023 11:02:00 AM
I knew this, so why do I still get it wrong with my pensivity. Ahh I'm not 100% pensivity is a word... seems right. Thought provoking poem that instills in me a desire to stop ruining everything with overthinking. Thanks :)
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Eric Ashford
Date: 9/12/2023 1:25:00 PM
Thank you Dilly, not only for reading it, but 'getting'' it!!

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