Cloak of Silence

she wore that same faded yellow
the cloak of October I called it
of the dying and the fading away

cheeks like willow trees, hollow
jagged gasps, cutting
the warmth of memory

eyes holding the blankness
of infertility
as if life had fallen into dormancy
beyond conception

she would lift bony hands
trying to capture the living
in a frail grasp

but time was drowning,
slipping deeper into sleep
sinking beneath consciousness

and breath labored
across chest's deepening valley
to settle like leaves
in Autumn silence...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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October 6, 2009 at 12:19 PM
Bernadette, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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October 4, 2009 at 1:01 PM
Amazing poem. Congrats!! Love LIght Truth Patricia
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September 26, 2009 at 11:21 AM
Berna dette, I just wanted to drop by and add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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September 24, 2009 at 11:57 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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June 25, 2009 at 11:05 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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June 25, 2009 at 10:28 AM
Congrats Bernadette on "Cloak of Silence" being featured. Vince
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June 23, 2009 at 5:54 PM
Bernadette - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week, God Bless, MJ
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June 23, 2009 at 1:18 PM
Good use of imagery and congratulations on your peom being featured this week. Ernilando
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June 22, 2009 at 4:40 AM
wonderful poem,..congrats on its feature !!! james
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June 21, 2009 at 6:34 PM
Much to think about in this poem. Good use of imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! I wish you ongoing success. Karen
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