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Cloak of Silence

she wore that same faded yellow the cloak of October I called it of the dying and the fading away cheeks like willow trees, hollow jagged gasps, cutting the warmth of memory eyes holding the blankness of infertility as if life had fallen into dormancy beyond conception she would lift bony hands trying to capture the living in a frail grasp but time was drowning, slipping deeper into sleep sinking beneath consciousness and breath labored across chest's deepening valley to settle like leaves in Autumn silence...

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Date: 10/6/2009 12:19:00 PM
Bernadette, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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Date: 10/4/2009 1:01:00 PM
Amazing poem. Congrats!! Love LIght Truth Patricia
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Date: 9/26/2009 11:21:00 AM
Berna dette, I just wanted to drop by and add--Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/24/2009 11:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/25/2009 11:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/25/2009 10:28:00 AM
Congrats Bernadette on "Cloak of Silence" being featured. Vince
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Date: 6/23/2009 5:54:00 PM
Bernadette - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week, God Bless, MJ
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Date: 6/23/2009 1:18:00 PM
Good use of imagery and congratulations on your peom being featured this week. Ernilando
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Date: 6/22/2009 4:40:00 AM
wonderful poem,..congrats on its feature !!! james
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Date: 6/21/2009 6:34:00 PM
Much to think about in this poem. Good use of imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! I wish you ongoing success. Karen
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