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Climbing Like Me
I climb to some lofty place I've never known, as one by one..., my feet alight the ladder rungs, though blistered now. I look up from the swaying, rickety works that ascend toward the heavens. Dreaming of down below.., where there is a ground. Now, try to remember what it felt like to walk barefooted..., through grass, and mud, and the sandy stream bed. From this vantage, the distant vista, my toiled years I see. The meadows, the hills, and the misty mountains beyond. I take my rest and watch the children playing far below, and feel the coolness of the growing twilight. Down below there is a chance for redemption. Up here, on this ladder of my choosing.., there appears none. Thirsty now, so many years gone, I long for the taste of cool water, that flows so far below, so cool. A small smirk plays across my face as I begin the climb again. I look out for miles, at the multitude of ladders. All of them climbing, squandering precious moments... like me.

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Date: 8/29/2019 12:29:00 PM
Wow, it looks like a posthumous journey or a prophetic dream, which are basically the same thing. If I were a teacher, not a poet, I would advise the protagonist to ignore regrets. They are the ghosts of past lifes. By the way, time doesn't exist either) P.S.: This poem gave me a great pleasure. Thank you, QtR.
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Date: 7/17/2019 5:59:00 AM
If I had every precious moment that I squandered, I would be in grade school again, and I do not like math well enough to do it again so soon. A poem that feels custom-written to the photo, Richard.
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Date: 3/27/2019 10:46:00 PM
Does the eagle ride the wind without a reason? Does a man? I like where your thoughts are going... see you there! (Raven, nice to hear from you! Meru)
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Date: 2/18/2019 4:00:00 PM
This is an intriguing, absorbing and pleasing allegory. The words and images they create delight the emotions and aesthetic and senses. Excellent work, Raven.
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Date: 1/1/2019 11:06:00 PM
ever climbing further and further from the things that satisfy... my soul aches in this dream like place you have made with your words. Excellent.
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Date: 12/23/2018 4:08:00 AM
A deep, introspective write, and a very engaging read, excellent piece.
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Date: 12/23/2018 2:50:00 AM
A wonderful and profound write worthy of many a read.. it lends itself to many readings.. the soul within always looking up to the highest of beauties.. striving.. going through pain to embrace joy and grace.. growing into beauty.. a great write and a pleasure to read.. Best regards Richard. Be blessed always.
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Date: 12/24/2018 2:08:00 PM
Thanks for the comment Besma. Happy Holidays to you & Yours. -Richard
Date: 12/23/2018 12:05:00 AM
poe let no less
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Date: 12/24/2018 2:10:00 PM
You are one of my favorite critics sand blown. Happy Holidays to you and Yours. -Richard

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