Climb

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My18 month grandson loves to play on the play structure at the park. It’s enjoyable to watch him be independent.

Climb one Climb two Climb to Climb three Climb four Then another Look up Look down Then round Go down Toes stretch To feel Then round Look up Then search For help Down! 2/12/2020

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Heidi Sands

Date: 2/12/2020 4:29:00 PM

I hope you feel better soon, Eve :)

Eve Roper
Date: 2/12/2020 4:57:00 PM

Thank you, me too.. I miss him

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/12/2020 3:45:00 PM

So sweet Eve :)

Eve Roper
Date: 2/12/2020 4:03:00 PM

Thank you, the joy of babysitting my grandbaby. My alarm didn't go off so I forgot pick him up... I was so out of it that I didn't even here my son calling and I have the phone just a foot of my head. I am down with the flu :(

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/12/2020 3:29:00 PM

oh how cute this is and how you constructed it, just like the steps going up to the slide or something!

Eve Roper
Date: 2/12/2020 4:01:00 PM

yes, up the ladder , he only slides down when he tries to climb up.