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Climax of Mind

i watch my footsteps fade within the break of morning's light as i feel your breath in a weathered touch against my flesh in a cascade of thoughts i am swept into the depths of the ocean's allure as it slowly kisses against the shore pulling back in a teasing way before inching closer to me i blush like sanguine folds across summer skies as the sun emerges less full then i in remembering through the climax of memories before they break with the waves the thunderous roar echoes back from the confines of my lonely heart as i watch my footsteps fade

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Date: 5/1/2020 5:22:00 PM
Reality brought close Chocolates of poetics runs in the verse Well brewed Sandy!!!
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Date: 8/31/2019 6:32:00 PM
I can picture this scene. Well expressed Sandra.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/31/2019 6:45:00 PM
Thank you Rick...i love the ocean, always so much to see and hear within its presence ...hope you are enjoying your weekend :) hugs
Date: 8/31/2019 5:00:00 PM
Nature is truly amazing Life affirming Nice read Sandra
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 8/31/2019 6:38:00 PM
Agree
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/31/2019 6:10:00 PM
Thank you, there is so much beauty to behold in nature if ones stops and looks :)
Date: 8/30/2019 5:14:00 PM
Another beautiful, alluring and sigh worthy poem my friend. Your words sing soft melodies from the page leaving your readers in awe. This is gorgeous and such a fitting poem to end my day. Thank you for sharing your talent with all of us.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 8/30/2019 7:06:00 PM
well thank you for the kind comment on this one and glad it helped end your day...enjoy your weekend my friend :) hugs

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