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Climate's Moods

And she laughs away, huffing snowstorm across icy clouds, then leaving me surprised in a furnace of heat: though I am annoyed by her impulsive moods-- rainy, sun- kissed , volcanic-- my exasperation has no force against this woman’s elemental power. Pithy Pants 2 Contest of Maureen Mc Greavy 2/15/2019

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Paul Callus

Date: 2/26/2019 8:02:00 AM

Personification at its best, Nette! This woman is suffering, not due to menopause, but because of mankind's greed and ignorance! ~ Congratulations on a most deserved win. Hugs // paul

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/25/2019 6:53:00 PM

Beautifully done, nette. Congrats on your win.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 2/23/2019 4:58:00 PM

I love you did. She is elemental! Congratulations on your win Nette! And thank you :) xomo!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2019 11:33:00 AM

Love how you peronified your theme. Congrats on your win. Love this one

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/18/2019 9:00:00 AM

She truly can be moody and frightening. Well penned. Good luck in the contest.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/16/2019 3:10:00 PM

Hi Nette, A temperamental woman is the weather - spot on with your personification! Great write. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/16/2019 1:00:00 PM

Excellent use of personification, Nette! You really deliver on the climate's moods by making her a woman who has the prerogative to change her mind. Weather here in the US has been very unpredictable lately, so your poem is timely now too! Best wishes for a win in Maureen's contest. I couldn't think of anything for it. Maybe I'll try a limerick at some point. Entries to my contest are flying in, so I don't even have time to eat :) Hugs, carolyn