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Clear Sky Wujue

Clear sky / bright stars shine Full moon / sweet kiss charms Dense cloud / lone man sobs Mind fog / love lost harms written 5th June for Suzette's wujue contest

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/14/2023 9:13:00 AM

Congrats on your win. A form I will have to look up. Hope things are good your way Jack. love phyl

Paul Callus

Date: 6/11/2023 1:48:00 AM

A short poem of contrasts, Jack. Congratulations on being on Suzette's winners' list. Regards // paul

Constance La France

Date: 6/7/2023 4:44:00 AM

Jack, congratulations on your win, wonderful !

Suzette Richards

Date: 6/6/2023 2:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in my contest, Jack.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/5/2023 1:23:00 PM

Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Sad that the grown man sobs though. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my pages. Sara