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Clarity In a Treasure Box

CLARITY IN A TREASURE BOX - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Nette Onclaud ROSE flower from her grave withered from the wind pink, her adored color barren as my tears for her “blossom from thriving to dying” Date Written: June 28, 2016

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/6/2016 6:06:00 PM

I love this, Laura Loo. BIG congrats for a well deserved win.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/5/2016 11:39:00 AM

This is excellent luloo. I loved this as much as the ones that won first place. Congratulations on your top win! 7 ; )

Lu Loo
Date: 7/5/2016 5:31:00 PM

awww thank you so much sweet lady :)-luloo

John Hamilton

Date: 7/4/2016 10:21:00 AM

Very touching poem, full of emotion, just loved it! Well deserving of placement!

Lu Loo
Date: 7/5/2016 5:30:00 PM

many thanks John! :)-luloo

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/2/2016 1:09:00 PM

i am stunned; this has an extraordinary mood and tone, lou... sweet congrats on your finest win and thanks for joining my contest..huggs

Lu Loo
Date: 7/2/2016 3:21:00 PM

thank you Nette so much for my placement in your contest. I loved writing it because it was different. I am honored, many thanks -luloo :)

Paul Callus

Date: 7/2/2016 9:41:00 AM

What a delightful pyramid, Laura! No wonder it's flying high on the winners' list. Congratulations! ~ Regards // paul

Lu Loo
Date: 7/2/2016 3:20:00 PM

many thanks Paul :)-luloo

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/29/2016 3:13:00 AM

Nicely done for this restricted form:) All the best:)

Lu Loo
Date: 7/2/2016 3:19:00 PM

thank you Jo :)-luloo

Eve Roper

Date: 6/28/2016 8:06:00 PM

Laura, wonderful subject you just reminded me of my dad's funeral little brother bought white roses one for each of the family and lay on dad's casket I brought them home and turned them upside down and hung them until they were dry a small memento. Good luck in the contest. Thank you so very much for reading my poem. Hugs Eve

Lu Loo
Date: 6/29/2016 11:45:00 AM

Eve, It's special, isn't it? I have made potpourri from a bunch of her flowers from her funeral. I sprinkled a little bit of rose oil on top after they dried off and they are laying in a vase in my kitchen. Sorry about your loss lady, very sad but we have these tangible memories to keep. lots of love -luloo

Supraja Kannan

Date: 6/28/2016 9:41:00 AM

A deep write...Gud luck in the contest...

Lu Loo
Date: 6/28/2016 12:03:00 PM

thank you Supraja :)-luloo