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City Sun Spots

City Sun Spots He’s got a twinkle in his eyes an aversion to cold prose he recites – obliquely – poetry a king without his clothes. She’s got no laces in her sneakers still they caress her dancing feet as she pirouettes on concrete floating down the city street. They invite the crowd to gather amid the rush hour din overwhelm the teeming madness, sound bordering on sin. The creation of a moment to distract the mongrel mobs snarling as life’s leashes lead to and from their jobs. These sunshine spots of life’s alarm awakening the long drugged need to shuck the yoke of drudgery, run freely as unbroken steed. Embrace the wind’s sharp eye, keen nose laugh at your shadow’s rumpled form rewrite the moments into change become the duckling’s inner swan. ©7/12/2017 submitted to – MID JULY STANDARD CONTEST

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Date: 7/19/2017 1:56:00 PM
You just unzipped the covers of my mind to the unprecedented worship of your adorable lines with a powerful choice of words that can't just be ignored. Showers of your wisdom is well palpated in this page and the only thing I can say is a big WELL DONE! Can't wait to have more of your mental command flowing through my reading mind.
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Date: 7/13/2017 11:55:00 AM
"snarling as life’s leashes lead to and from their jobs." These lines hit me hard. A great poem about the busy stresses of life. Enjoyed it! - Dean
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Date: 7/13/2017 7:54:00 AM
I think my inner swan found another pond:) Great message John. Good luck my friend.
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Date: 7/13/2017 7:08:00 AM
Wonderfully expressed John. A beautiful poem with an uplifting message woven in.
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