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City of My Youth

In Andres City where my feet grew up Ancestral house draped nights mildly beaming, I retrace childhood with gazes, non-stop Where pillow fights turned into hushed dreaming. Strange, most oak trees now ripped by skylines And the fountains... oh gone for young tugs-of war; Where siblings rushed on for afternoon pastimes Till Mom called for dinner through doors, afar. Sketching the old plaza of teenage fun My shoes roams, this scene now a memory; Trimmed with fiestas-- dances I rerun, Embracing the girl and adult in me. I look and absorb, for the moon will set Never exactly as it hangs low tonight... And though my heart sinks, it will not forget Each moment which lives within--ever bright! Contest: Landscapes and Towns Contest 5/2/2017

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Date: 5/6/2017 7:29:00 AM
Great story telling Nette. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 5/6/2017 12:43:00 AM
Hi Nette, as Connie says you can never go back, I feel like that when I visit my town where I grew up, not that it has changed that much, but I do like to visit as it does bring back memories, your town does sound nice though good luck in the contest and take care.......Vera
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Date: 5/4/2017 9:37:00 PM
What a beautiful tribute to your city and precious memories of your youth Nette! They say "you can never go home again" and that is because things change so much and it is never as you remember. : ) 7
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Date: 5/4/2017 6:50:00 AM
Lovely poem with beautiful childhood memories... Loved it... A big 7...
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Date: 5/3/2017 10:28:00 PM
Beautifully done nette...GL in contest...all the best...^WW^
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Date: 5/3/2017 7:14:00 AM
- A beautiful poem with many memories - Good luck in the contest, Nette - Happy day :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/2/2017 5:56:00 PM
such a wonderful place to have grown up, mine was a quarter mile from the corner of drunks and pimps, how lucky you were..good luck my friend
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Date: 5/2/2017 1:21:00 PM
Absolutely sentimental in its delivery with subtle rhyme, but the imprints of a meaningful space is a satin kiss in itself!
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Date: 5/2/2017 11:03:00 AM
A beautiful poetic stroll down memory lane Nette. This brings back thoughts of my hometown and how much I miss it. Nicely done my friend.
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