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Collaboration poem of Space Cadet and Darren White
Wesley C (Space Cadet) and I did a funny exercise together: he wrote a first line, sent it to me, I added a line, sent it to him. Rinse and repeat. After twenty lines we had a silly poem, with spies, paper with hidden messages and all, and then we stopped.
But the first five lines were so beautiful, I just HAD to do something with them. These lines are the first five lines of the poem below. I finished the poem, Wesley added and edited, we both revised some more, and this is the result.
I hope you all like it as much as we both do :)
Darren.