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Cinqku-1

dusk falls the clock ticks darkness awaits alone again until dawn smiles 11/29/17

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Date: 12/14/2017 10:48:00 PM
This is beautiful and a form for me to look up :)
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James Inman
Date: 12/15/2017 2:42:00 AM
Thank you for the lovely comment.
Date: 12/10/2017 7:41:00 PM
Thanks for your thoughtful notes on my poems, Ralph. Let me see if your other recent poem might be one I never saw yet!!
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James Inman
Date: 12/11/2017 4:23:00 AM
Hi Andrea, thanks for the visit.
Date: 12/10/2017 4:27:00 AM
Hey...you did this very well James...I never tried this style...great Cinqku my friend...god bless and happy holidays...^WW^
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James Inman
Date: 12/10/2017 4:46:00 AM
Thank you WW, and a very happy Holiday to you as well.
Date: 12/9/2017 7:45:00 AM
WOW! James this is just awesomeness! I absolutely love it, and a fave! Hugs and smiles :)
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James Inman
Date: 12/9/2017 12:10:00 PM
Thank you so much Akkina.
Date: 12/9/2017 1:25:00 AM
Greet dawn with a smile back - she holds many blessings! Lovely little verse. Always, Laura
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James Inman
Date: 12/9/2017 6:15:00 AM
I see her often from my window, always awe inspiring, thank you Laura.
Date: 12/3/2017 10:24:00 PM
Vivid imagery in this stellar piece. Congrats, James!
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James Inman
Date: 12/4/2017 5:48:00 AM
Thank you Edward.
Date: 12/2/2017 8:12:00 PM
also I am going through recent winners on that one list and see that you got a great placement with this one. BIG congrats.
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James Inman
Date: 12/4/2017 5:49:00 AM
Thanks Andrea.
Date: 12/1/2017 11:17:00 PM
Well done, James. Lovely cinqku.
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James Inman
Date: 12/2/2017 3:39:00 AM
Thank you Line.
Date: 12/1/2017 9:45:00 PM
Wow, first cinquku. This is awesome, Ralph. Hey, I have to thank you for reading SO many of my poems and commenting today. I forgot the list I promised you. I am so caught up in many things in my life. Bad and good. But trying to be positive. I can't even believe I am one of the top community builders when I can barely fit in an hour a day here any more. Hubbie is on his way home from work right now and I have at least ten more poets to see, but let me see one more of YOURS> one of my fave guys!
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James Inman
Date: 12/2/2017 3:39:00 AM
You make me smile Andrea, thank you. It doesn't happen much anymore.
Date: 12/1/2017 7:40:00 AM
A short one, that causes us to ponder. Congratulations James!
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James Inman
Date: 12/1/2017 9:15:00 PM
Thank you Kim.
Date: 11/29/2017 9:45:00 PM
Lovely write, Jim.
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James Inman
Date: 11/30/2017 5:06:00 AM
Thanks Rhoda.

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