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Poem Published: 14th December 2024

Photos: gR


Church Walk

there is a place of deep repose
where chasing Christmas never goes

along a path of fallen leaves
where autumn’s warm late beauty breathes

- a timeless tranquil silent space
that keeps at bay life’s rats that race

and frees the mind from mindless talk
so thoughts can wander while hearts walk.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Rees Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 6:27 AM
Wish I was there,Gary !
Radice Avatar
September 12, 2026 at 9:43 AM
Great to hear from you Peter. I hope all is as well as can be. Church Walk exists both as a pathway near to where I live and as a mindset. Both places are as calming as each other. Take care read you soon and Cheers - Gary
Kamoonpuri Avatar
September 9, 2026 at 6:32 AM
Awesome autumn imagery poem abd a peaceful place away from the rat race yeahh wow! Kudos to this poem! Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Radice Avatar
September 10, 2026 at 6:52 AM
Thanks S. Cheers - Gary
Goldsmith Avatar
July 9, 2026 at 9:22 AM
I enjoyed reading your powerful "Church Walk" write. This says so much. Great Pictures....   I wish you would write more. Have a Fun Day Writing Away...........
Radice Avatar
July 9, 2026 at 10:36 AM
Thank you Paula. Good to see that you've refilled your magical pen with poetic ink after a hiatus from The Soup! Read you soon. Cheers - Gary
Peck Avatar
June 22, 2026 at 12:35 PM
Gary, like all your poetry, this grabs my heart.
Radice Avatar
June 22, 2026 at 9:34 PM
Thank you Ann. Lovely to hear from you. Hope all is well. Cheers - Gary
Terry Avatar
April 5, 2026 at 12:23 PM
I love the rhyme scheme and the autumn imagery in your poem. Great work!
Radice Avatar
April 7, 2026 at 8:32 AM
Thanks Angela. I got the inspiration for this while actually walking down Church Walk. The words just flowed at the time. Cheers - Gary
Agustin Avatar
November 15, 2025 at 3:42 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts on "Church Walk" through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Radice Avatar
November 16, 2025 at 7:27 AM
Thank you Beata. Cheers - Gary
Curtis Avatar
November 3, 2025 at 4:50 AM
Intricate simplicity, an excellent write !
Radice Avatar
November 4, 2025 at 10:13 AM
Jerry, thanks so much. I’ll admit that I’m very nicely surprised by the number of lovely comments this poem has had. Cheers - Gary
Godwin Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 6:21 AM
VERY lovely, very. Truly, very and really - honest (woke up silly this morn) (but sincere)
Radice Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 1:00 PM
and very much appreciated CayCay :). Cheers - Gary
Rodrigues Avatar
August 16, 2025 at 3:52 PM
Beautiful write! Our church parking lot will be redone this year. It has so many cracks and faded lines. Still it inspires one to pray for all the needs of congregants, as we all have cracks.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 6:50 PM
I love that, Gary!
Radice Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 2:08 AM
Thank you Kim. Back many years ago before cars, UK public footpaths were used for travel between settlements for work, markets, and religious gatherings. Some of the paths were used for pilgrimages. We still have 140,000 miles of public footpaths in the UK today and - like the path described in the poem - all are protected by law that allow public access across private land. Great to get out into the countryside! :) Cheers - Gary
Daniels Avatar
August 11, 2025 at 1:21 AM
simple, beautiful, natural ...you speak for the walk, Gary. Last few words are so powerful...how our hearts just want to walk the walk & stop the talk !
Radice Avatar
August 11, 2025 at 9:17 PM
Thank you Ghairo. I often find that walking helps to free the mind. Cheers - Gary.
Dietrich Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 9:50 PM
I see this won. What contest was it in. Again seeing it, I want to fave it now
Radice Avatar
August 10, 2025 at 10:10 PM
The poem came 10th in a recent contest sponsored by Rob Carmack "Premier VIi Open. I often get inspiration for poems when out walking. Thank you for your visit, read, comments and fav. Much appreciated Andrea. Cheers - Gary
Lawrence Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 5:06 PM
I journeyed with you Gary.. wandering in places where hearts walk. Just beautiful..going inward to the place of quiet whispers and tranquility. Love it. Susan :)
Radice Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 2:23 AM
Your lovely comments are forever poetry in themselves Susan. Cheers - Gary
Kauffman Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 12:16 PM
Gary I have loved this poem ever since I first read it. I love the way to bring to poetic life train stations, church walks and cities! You have a unique eye for life and a very special style all your own! I have missed you and your very special poems here in the soup. Congratulations on your win! Blessings my friend! So glad to see you enter this marvelous poem.
Radice Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 8:12 AM
Every now and again Sam I'll write a poem with the plan to publish it here just for a few days until I pull it. I tend to do this when my muse dries up to keep my poetic brain from falling asleep completely. A poem that I think lacks a bit of oomph but is OK for a few days. I intended to pull this poem but grew to like it more and more as the time went on. Suffice to stay it's staying up now. The feedback has been lovely. Thank you. :) Cheers - Gary
Carmack Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 6:18 AM
Love this, especially the first half. Congrats.
Radice Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 8:07 AM
Thanks Rob and much appreciation for my placement in your contest. Cheers - Gary
Lamoureux Avatar
July 25, 2025 at 6:02 AM
Simple and beautiful. Congratulations on your top ten placement.
Radice Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 8:05 AM
Thanks Richard. It was inspired by a walkI took a few minutes from my house. :). Cheers - Gary
Fowler Avatar
July 23, 2025 at 11:07 AM
As comforting as a cup of tea and warm blanket Gary. :)
Radice Avatar
July 23, 2025 at 12:56 PM
Your lovely comments are comforting too Linda. Thank you. :) Cheers - Gary
Kingston Avatar
May 31, 2025 at 3:41 PM
Your poem brought back of a childhood memory. My Uncle John built a path through with the woods when I was 8, carrying an old over used Audubon bird book. We'd sit on an old fence and try to identify the birds we could hear, matching their songs to the book's pictures. I'm over 40 and still remember that secret path in the woods. You're somber poem made me feel at peace by reminding me of that special woodland path.
Radice Avatar
June 1, 2025 at 1:32 AM
Hi Marikate. The very fact that my poem brought back a childhood memory for you is, in itself, high praise indeed. Thank you. In the UK we are blessed with 140,000 miles of public footpaths which make up our public rights of way network. There are so many secret paths that take us over farmland and through woods. Great to hear from you. Cheers - Gary
Godwin Avatar
March 13, 2025 at 3:08 PM
What does TFS stand for? Thanks for Sharing? I'm like my friend, Andrea, below - I love this simple, sleek and jotty poem. Did you self-publish? Will I ever know if you answer that question? Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Radice Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 3:13 AM
Hi Cay Cay. Yes, I think Andrea’s tfs below in her comment stands for thanks for sharing. :) When it comes to publishing, the only place I’ve ever published any poems is on this platform and its anthologies. I have played around with the idea of self publishing but decided the audience here is so much bigger than for any self published book of mine. :) Where possible I like to keep my poetry easy to read and simple in its form so I’m glad you like the poem. Cheers - Gary
Dietrich Avatar
February 6, 2025 at 7:13 PM
I love this simple yet sublime poem. TFS.
Radice Avatar
February 6, 2025 at 10:57 PM
I've just spent 10 mins trying to figure out what TFS means..and it's just dawned on me LOL! Thanks Andrea :) Cheers - Gary
Sambourne Avatar
January 25, 2025 at 6:59 PM
Superb writing, Gary. Your final line is searing. So true of our meandering thoughts often on what consumes the heart. Excellent rhyming as always.Thank you for encouraging me to return to PoetrySoup. Best wishes always, Brian
Radice Avatar
January 26, 2025 at 2:40 AM
Hi Brian. First up it’s great to read you back here. Thank you for your lovely comments. I’m so glad you (and others) have mentioned the use of the word heart. Originally the last line was “ so thoughts can wander while we walk.” The heart gives it heart methinks. :) Cheers - Gary
George Avatar
January 22, 2025 at 9:09 PM
Hi Gary, you always write on tranquil scenes, deserted and lonely. Such a place is the one ideal for a church to be situated, away from the din and bustle of teeming life. While walking through such a place, we free the mind from mindless talks, when 'hearts walk' and not the feet. Lovely poem generating vibes of peace. Congratulations, dear friend on your win.
Radice Avatar
January 23, 2025 at 1:21 AM
Hi Valsa. Thank you. As much as I love Christmas, the build up to it is something I could do without. I’m not even sure why there is a rush to shop these days as unlike the time I was growing up most of the shops are only shut for a day or two. ..and you are right..I do write about tranquil places…Perhaps more often now than I did..I think that says a lot about me. :) Cheers - Gary
Dietrich Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 1:26 PM
such a soothing and peaceful poem. Congrats also on your win
Radice Avatar
January 22, 2025 at 12:34 AM
Thanks Andrea. I'm in much need of soothing and peace at the moment, what with the way the world is going. Cheers - Gary
Goldsmith Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 8:01 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful write. Great Picture... I enjoyed reading this one. Have a blessed day with your win as you write away..................
Radice Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 8:16 AM
Hi Paula. Thanks for your comments. I’m glad you enjoyed the read. Cheers - Gary
Kendrick Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 4:58 AM
Back with congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Sara K
Radice Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 9:20 AM
Thanks Sara. I very rarely enter contests so it was a nice surprise to be placed. Cheers - Gary
Peck Avatar
January 16, 2025 at 1:40 PM
Beautiful, Gary. I especially love "along a path of fallen leaves, where autumn's warm late beauty breathes." You have the most endearing way with words! Not all poets have it. Take care, Ann
Radice Avatar
January 16, 2025 at 2:09 PM
Thank you Ann. You too have the most endearing way with words and they're very much appreciated. Cheers - Gary
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