Church of Blue Tides

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In the mist, like a dream, she has weathered the seasons… On the wind swept shelf, as if silently sleeping Where souls in her graveyard, are hers for the keeping Staring out at the tide, where the seagulls sweep low In the moldering courtyard, one can linger awhile Among ancient arches of the old Mission style Names locked in history, and stories revealed are etched in the headstones, now ancient and frail The cracked marble fountain once shimmered so fair Above the church doorway, vines have withered and died Aloft from the steeple, are the four watchful eyes Looking out over waters, of the deep crimson tide Three bronzed vestige bells dangle high overhead Their voices are silenced, by the time keeper's death The rafters are filled with the toll of the dove To offer their souls for the bells that lost breath And the echo's of sainthood, and moss covered jade From the crumbling ruins, stones humbly laid Dark shadows of saints stain the moss covered jade A weeping old willow, with leaves brittle and dry One drinks with the ears, and listens with eyes The bronze clangs of vespers, and prayer chanting tides One might hear the ancient echo, yet, for whom do old bells call? Making sense of the senseless, are there untold stories tolled? Giving voice to age-old questions, and feelings unexplained The bells ring out, without a sound, across the human tide

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 8/6/2015 9:56:00 PM
You have so many voices dear Carrie, I can never tell which verse is yours. I enjoyed all the sensations tastes, sounds etc. coming from this verse very much. Thank you for entering the contest. Light & Love
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Date: 8/4/2015 9:32:00 PM
DITTO....Wonderfully written Carrie. A smooth, enjoyable trip through the history of the bells.
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Date: 8/4/2015 8:27:00 AM
Gorgeous write, Carrie. A pleasure to read.
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Date: 8/4/2015 6:46:00 AM
Very beautiful Carrie - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/4/2015 12:59:00 AM
Congrats on ur first place winning awesome write Carrie! Love the take!
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Date: 8/4/2015 12:27:00 AM
Carrie, Congratulations, on your win in Debbie's contest. Love SKAT
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Date: 8/4/2015 12:06:00 AM
Lovely work, Carrie, captures a mood so well, brilliantly desciptive, and a worthy win. Viv x
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Date: 10/6/2011 9:37:00 PM
congrats on your shared first place win with this beautifully penned piece Carrie
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Date: 10/5/2011 5:09:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on an exciting first place win with this lovely poetry so delightful to read luv..
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Date: 10/5/2011 5:00:00 PM
You do have a way with words, Carrie. I am always amazed and enthralled with your poetry. Nicely penned. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 10/5/2011 4:54:00 PM
A wonderful piece Carrie. Congratulations on anouther first place win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/5/2011 12:59:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Carrie. Congrats on your 1st place win. Kim
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Date: 10/5/2011 12:05:00 PM
A truly beautiful poem, Carrie. Congratulations on a very deserving win in the contest! Love, Annalise
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Date: 10/5/2011 11:41:00 AM
Nicely written Carrie. Congratulations on a well deserved win.
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Date: 10/5/2011 8:20:00 AM
Good writing. Looking forward to your next winner.
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Date: 10/5/2011 1:31:00 AM
Oh Carrie this is beautiful. I felt it in my heart and saw it in my mind's eye. many congrats.
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Date: 10/4/2011 1:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Carrie in "The Church By The Ocean" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/30/2011 11:59:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry today Carrie. I wish you a most enjoyable weekend with lots of sunshine and happy thoughts. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/29/2011 6:37:00 PM
wow... sure am enjoyin' readin' all the church poems! "A weeping old willow" ..... yes, I've met her. Solid, Carrie! Namaste~N
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