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Christmas Snow

On wings of swept sky, the dawn’s sun adorns the shimmering snow in magical light, from winter’s first snow on snug Christmas morn. Innocent faces gleam, old are reborn as fanciful flakes seem to rise in flight on wings of swept sky, the dawn’s sun adorns. Powder settles, softening sharpest thorns as spring’s flowers sleep beneath drifts of white from winter’s first snow on snug Christmas morn. Oh, joyous wonder, no past years to mourn! The hills and trees sparkle like child’s eyes bright, on wings of swept sky, the dawn’s sun adorns. Our gifts are unwrapped, the day’s all but worn and festive flakes frolic well into night from winter’s first snow on snug Christmas morn. Through frosty pane, we watched peaceful day born with glistening nature’s brilliance in sight. On wings of swept sky, the dawn’s sun adorns from winter’s first snow on snug Christmas morn. for Gail's Christmas Snow Contest, 11/26/14

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Date: 12/26/2014 9:00:00 PM
Rhonda,, Congratulations on your awesome "*Christmas Snow*" win. Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/25/2014 4:36:00 PM
This truly beautiful poem was a joy to read once again. Congratulations on your well deserved first place win! Lovely work, Rhonda!... Merry Christmas to you and your family!
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Date: 12/20/2014 5:17:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 12/14/2014 5:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your beautiful poem, Rhonda. Blessings and Merry Christmas
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Date: 12/13/2014 4:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your lovely Villanelle and your 1st place win Rhonda.
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Date: 12/13/2014 1:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved first place win!
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Date: 12/13/2014 1:40:00 PM
Just amazing talent displayed here. Brilliant! A Fav!
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Date: 12/13/2014 9:20:00 AM
Hi Rhonda, You have nice language utilization here with creative seasonal pictures and images. It also has a solid and sound poetry structure in the villanelle form. Congratulations on your excellent win. Have a very Merry Christmas season. Earl
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Date: 12/13/2014 1:37:00 AM
lovely villanelle Rhonda congrats on win hugs
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Date: 12/12/2014 10:48:00 PM
wow, amazing in villanelle form. Loved the part about festive flakes frolic. So cool!!! Congrats on a very well deserved win.
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Date: 12/12/2014 9:46:00 PM
Congratulations, Rhonda!snowy magical Christmas write!
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Date: 12/12/2014 9:12:00 PM
congratulations Rhonda on your well deserved win
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Date: 12/12/2014 8:38:00 PM
Wonderful poem. I enjoyed reading this and God bless you. With love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 12/12/2014 8:25:00 PM
Nicely done villanelle, congratulations on the win, Rhonda
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Date: 12/12/2014 7:56:00 PM
Lovely villanelle! Congrad's on your win. Happy Holidays Light & Love
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Date: 12/12/2014 1:00:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem, Rhonda! Congratulations on your well-deserved 1st place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 12/12/2014 11:47:00 AM
A good Poem on Chrismas Snow,congrats on your worthy win Rhonda...huggs
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Date: 11/29/2014 1:07:00 AM
"Powder settles, softening sharpest thorns".... I don't know how anyone couldn't smile when that first beautiful snow falls!.... This poem was written beautifully, Rhonda. The imagery is so enchanting! Good luck in Gail's contest!
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Date: 11/28/2014 10:44:00 AM
white always draws such purity at christmas beautifully painted rhonda love how this drew to me excellent pen dear friend
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Date: 11/27/2014 10:03:00 AM
fascinated by this gleaming write, Rhonda.. you are a snow queen!.. huggs
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Date: 11/27/2014 9:35:00 AM
What a lovely Villanelle, Rhonda! The imagery is beautiful while the spirit of Christmas snow is felt throughout. The thought of softened thorns is a very positive one, too. Enjoyed. #7 // paul
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Date: 11/26/2014 3:17:00 PM
absolutely stunning wonderful rhyme and fabulous imagery - good luck:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/26/2014 1:58:00 PM
This is a fantastic poem!! Very well done!!!
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Date: 11/26/2014 10:37:00 AM
You have the most delightful style -- graceful, light, airy, peaceful, and so incredibly graceful. Your poem filled me with joy and delight -- I wanted to go out with the kids and make snow angles. . . hope you all have a blessed thanksgiving. This is going to my fav.
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Date: 11/26/2014 10:20:00 AM
What an enchanting write! Superb. I loved this line: Powder settles, softening sharpest thorn...Yes, there seems to be some sort of magic around this time where hate is forgotten and love is reborn. Of course...It is because of His love. Lovely piece. Good luck in the contest.
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