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Christmas Senryu

tilting to the right.. paper chains made by small hands children's pure delight For Andrea's contest

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/13/2010 3:21:00 PM

Brought back memories..Congrats..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/6/2010 12:37:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Andrea's contest "Haiku Me A Christmas Tree" Barbara. Love, Carol

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 12/5/2010 11:18:00 AM

Many congrats Barbara on picking up coveted HM in the winners list with this beautiful entry in Andrea's contest. Luv/best wishes........Hitendra Mehta

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/5/2010 10:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your HM in the contest, Barb! Love, Audrey

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/5/2010 8:12:00 AM

Congrats BG on your HM in Andrea's cool contest with this excellent and expressive entry my friend.. enjoy a special honor today with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/5/2010 5:34:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved HM win in the contest of Andrea, Barbara

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/5/2010 2:28:00 AM

What a delightful image Barbara, congrats to you ;-)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/4/2010 9:41:00 PM

I think this is one of the best, LNC. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2010 4:46:00 PM

Congatulations for your HM, Barbara. It was a delight to read. soupmail

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/30/2010 12:49:00 PM

how endearing, barbara... so childlike deep descriptions..SOUP MAIL! warmest, nette

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 11/30/2010 7:52:00 AM

very sweet and original,Me like :)LOVELY!

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 11/28/2010 9:11:00 PM

love it, very vivid, I can imagine it well, good luck!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/28/2010 12:19:00 AM

sweet one, Barb. Thanks for your participation. Luv, Andrea

Mitchell Falcon

Date: 11/27/2010 7:22:00 PM

I entered the contest as well, good luck. Enjoyed, Mitchell

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/26/2010 4:47:00 PM

A lovely entry BG ..good luck .. reads like a super top notch winner luv.. enjoy a happy weekend..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/26/2010 1:03:00 PM

You have pictures a nice scene children giving you delight, barbara

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/26/2010 10:55:00 AM

I beautiful scene of children around a tree, warms us all... best of luck with this winner...luv Michael

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/26/2010 8:35:00 AM

This is AWESOME, dear LNC. I love the way you brought the joy of children in decorating trees to this senryu. Sure to place high in the contest!! Hope you enjoyed your Thanksgiving and that your pies were devoured by your hungry clan. Love, Carolyn

Francine Roberts

Date: 11/26/2010 7:32:00 AM

love it, homemade decorations are wonderful, good luck in the contest