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Christmas Mourning

Twenty seventh of December the year 2008 A date I will always remember A day I will always hate It was the day you died my love and part of me died too Although ten years have passed a question I will often ask Why did you have to go for we loved each other so It is so very lonely here though friends and family look out for me, call me each day But it’s you I want, but I cannot say Another Christmas fast approaching vivid memories never fade Those last few weeks, so painful wishing memories would erase I always mark the day you went by going to the sea I send my love inside a card a kiss, I watch it float away For both of us had always said to the sea we would go when we were dead So when my time arrives, that is where I want to be but until then my darling, I walk daily by the sea On this the tenth anniversary I want to say to you I am surviving every day, for what else can I do but finally the sun came out after all those years of rain And even though I miss you so, I can laugh and sing again Date: 17th November 2018 Contest: CHRISTMAS MOURNING Sponsor: PS Awtry 9th placement

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Date: 12/4/2018 9:20:00 PM
So good to laugh and sing again! I remember when my Aunt (now passed) lost my Uncle. For a year or more and perhaps for the rest of her life, it was hard. Congrats on your win, Ann!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/5/2018 12:15:00 AM
Thank you so much for your congrats Kim I really appreciate you comments. Yes I think you learn to live with your grief, but never really get over it. Kindest thoughts Ann x
Date: 12/4/2018 2:16:00 AM
Anne thank you for entering your lovely and moving poem in the contest. Congratulations on your win.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/4/2018 5:14:00 PM
Thank you so much PS for your lovely comments and my placement in your competition. Kindest thoughts Ann x
Date: 12/4/2018 12:04:00 AM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win! Janice
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 12/4/2018 12:24:00 AM
Thank you so much Janice, how nice to meet you and thanks for your lovely congrats (my very best friend was called Janice) Kindest thoughts Ann x
Date: 11/15/2018 9:46:00 AM
Thank you so for sharing this beautifully sad piece. <3
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/15/2018 10:44:00 AM
Thank you PS I really do appreciate your kind comment. Kindest thoughts Ann x
Date: 11/2/2018 2:33:00 PM
Utterly poignant poetry!! I am glad I got to read this one of yours today. It is heart wrenching!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/2/2018 2:38:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, it came straight from my heart. Kindest wishes Ann x
Date: 11/2/2018 4:20:00 AM
A heartfelt tribute, enjoyed by someone in heaven. I am sure you are truly feeling the holidays rapidly approaching, so you have prayers from Kansas, Ann.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 11/2/2018 9:15:00 AM
Thank you for your prayers Caren, that means so much. As Christmas approaches it's always a difficult time, but writing this poem was extremely cathartic and I know Frank is there watching over me. Kindest thoughts Ann x

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