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Christmas Miracles (Five Haiku

nearly twelve o’clock our tabby opens one eye distant “Oh ho ho!” this one special night the hen house door stands open wily fox retreats some little green men from God knows where see the light bow in silent prayer meanest man on Earth on his camel hears the babe vows eternal love he trusted the Star when the shepherd left his flock wolves by Star transfixed

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Date: 12/29/2015 6:06:00 PM
hey back to your XMas Miracles!! What is your favorite of all your Xmas poems, DAver? I know you have done more than this one!
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Date: 12/30/2015 11:40:00 AM
My favorite is the one just posted - Kitty, kitty, chased by dogs...As Christmas is for children, I like the simplicity of this one. Love, daver
Date: 1/4/2010 11:12:00 AM
And how did I miss this one before Christmas!?? It's never too late to see delightful poetry on the Soup! Loved this! :)!!
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Date: 12/29/2009 8:48:00 AM
What a picture you paint and what a story you tell. So very entertaining, my friend. Also, Dave, I wish to thank you for all your kind comments and support over the last year. Best wishes to you in the New Year. Lainie.
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Date: 12/27/2009 4:12:00 PM
What a creative poem! This sure fits with the message of Christmas. Wonderful!!! Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Happy New Year! Karen
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Date: 12/27/2009 2:56:00 AM
Wonderful read Daver, Merry Christmas to you >> James
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Date: 12/26/2009 1:38:00 PM
This is very sweet and gentle...Best wishes, Sara
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Date: 12/25/2009 5:06:00 AM
fun haiku's! Daver! nice! jimbo
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Date: 12/24/2009 7:03:00 PM
Hey, NIce little miracles! andrea
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Date: 12/24/2009 11:48:00 AM
Daver, Miracles are the magic of love. Thank you for sharing these miracle haiku with us. Happy Christmas and New Year 2010 to you. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 12/24/2009 9:21:00 AM
Interesting write in this one. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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