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Christmas Magic-Win

Christmas Magic
UUUUF…the mailman taps on the door, Plop, Plop as the cards drop on the floor roooooommm runs the vacuum cleaner Oh, there’s mighty ringing of the buzzer Come buddies Gail, Leo, Craig, Frank and Bob Here’re ribbons and boxes, get on job Boiling oil is plashing in the pan off Sugar is gurgling on the hot stove On the baking tray, gravy’s dripping Tasteful turkey is roasting Dad is busy clicking the camera Cleaning zooming my mom Lara Guys are busy gurgling down beers Baby bawls and rattles with cheers Lilt of crooning carolers heard nearer Santa whispering something to his deer. Quietly rustles in Christmas at last Music blares out with merry blast In the hall our family gathers with joy And Dan ready with a magic trick to enjoy.
======================================= Date: 21-11-13 Dr. Ram Mehta Second Place Win in Contest: Christmas Magic by Gail Angel Doyle

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Date: 1/31/2014 1:29:00 PM
Ahh...wonderful win Dr Ram...congratulations
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Date: 1/16/2014 4:36:00 AM
You have visualized the celebration. One can see through your words.// Thumbs up // Congrats on your win...
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Date: 1/15/2014 9:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your big win Dr. Mehta. This was fun to read. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/15/2014 6:39:00 PM
Ram a pen of fun and deeper meanings congrats on win Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 12/8/2013 10:35:00 PM
Your poem is full of Christmas cheer and merriment. It makes you think about all those good things. I love listening to the carols at Christmas. That turkey roasting in the oven with all the family gathering together at this very special time of the year. Even remembered the beer drinking. I wish you and your family a very happy Christmas and all the best for the New Year. Well done Dr. Ram
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Date: 12/3/2013 12:17:00 AM
Hey, hey! A magic trick!..... Alright! Well thank you for including me in this fine write of Christmas joy. :o) Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 12/2/2013 8:45:00 PM
Dr. Ram This is a cute and charming write about a wonderful holiday season. Nice job Thanks for the congrats on my Luck Reversal poem
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Date: 11/26/2013 10:42:00 PM
Xmas Day ......Nothing else like it
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Date: 11/26/2013 6:48:00 PM
lovely picture you paint Ram gl in contest Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 11/26/2013 2:04:00 PM
Happy holidays to you too, dear Ram. Love, daver
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Date: 11/25/2013 8:28:00 PM
The hustle and bustle of Christmas! Good work Dr. Ram!
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Date: 11/25/2013 7:44:00 PM
this is a very festive one inviting your friends onto it. How nice, Dr. Ram. A very enjoyable read.
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Date: 11/25/2013 3:06:00 PM
jolly write indeed, dr ram
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Date: 11/25/2013 12:24:00 PM
This poem is full of wonder and delight. Good luck.
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Date: 11/25/2013 7:29:00 AM
really good Dr.Ram Mehta.wonderful.awesome. (: )Jenish.
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