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we must leave fresh mince pies for Santa early night ... Santa’s due tomorrow toys for me by the tree Santa’s been! CharlieKu 3 3 3 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Charles Messina 12/11/18

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Date: 1/2/2019 4:12:00 PM
Ahh!! I see that you had been a very good girl for you got some toys. Enjoyed reading your winning work. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 1/2/2019 4:18:00 PM
lol Sara, I got the best gift ever this year my son home for 2 weeks, I wanted nothing more:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/2/2019 12:45:00 PM
so cute and I don't think I even saw it yet. Congrats, Jan.
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Date: 1/2/2019 1:08:00 PM
thanks Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/1/2019 11:41:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win in the Charlieku, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/2/2019 1:07:00 PM
thanks Anne-lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/1/2019 8:41:00 PM
Love this, Jan. But I must say you made me hungry for a slice of that delicious looking pie. Great Imagery and a terrific Charlieku! Congratulations on your placement in my contest and thanks for always supporting them. Wish you have a wonderful Healthy & Happy New Year...Hugs // Charlie xx
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Date: 1/2/2019 3:58:00 AM
Thanks for the contest prompt. I do tend to write for fewer and fewer contests I'll try and support yours as long as the muse is willing but she can be like a temperamental teenager from time to time:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/14/2018 5:17:00 AM
Nice Christmas with Nice Dish. I am tempted. Love
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Date: 1/2/2019 3:57:00 AM
thanks Anisha sorry I missed your comment before, hope you have a wonderful 2019:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/14/2018 3:27:00 AM
This is a very nice Charlieku. Won't Santa be happy when he sees the fresh mince pies!
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Date: 12/15/2018 4:09:00 AM
I detest mince pies lol he would never get them fresh from my kitchen lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/14/2018 1:29:00 AM
Lovely... Happy Holidays...
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Date: 12/15/2018 4:08:00 AM
Thanks Pashang, I have my son home next week that is the greatest gift I can have:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/13/2018 6:19:00 PM
Wonderful Holiday Haiku, Jan. Hope Santa brings all that you wish for. Warmest wishes~ Warren
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Date: 12/15/2018 4:07:00 AM
My gift arrives on Thursday, my son is home - I wish for nothing else:-) Hubby and I aren't even buying eachother gifts this year, his cancer was a wake up call, since his surgery in 2013 we spent £10 on eachother but this yr we aren't bothering with that, we buy when we need to not because a day dictates - I've yet to get him a birthday present of my own (shared one with mum) his birthday was november:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 12/13/2018 12:50:00 PM
A delightful Charlieku, Jan, written from a child's innocent perspective that is sure to touch Charlie's heart. Excellent! Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn
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Date: 12/15/2018 4:05:00 AM
Thanks Carolyn, Christmas is such a magical time for the little ones:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/13/2018 7:38:00 AM
I have missed you much though here you be if I but click! Sounds so easy, but there is so much and so many to click on that I haven't enough time for my body! I enjoyed your write for the contest, it is as clever as is Jan expected. I pray all is golden in your world. Be well. Love ... CayCay
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Date: 12/15/2018 4:04:00 AM
I have the best present next Thursday - my son comes home. I am having no family presents just his presence is enough for me:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/13/2018 12:20:00 AM
Lovely Christmas hakiu Jan, remember those images vividly, good luck. Tom
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Date: 12/14/2018 3:35:00 AM
thanks Tom, it is a magical time for children:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/13/2018 12:06:00 AM
I am pretty sure Santa wants a week drink with the pies too!!!!! :)
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Date: 12/14/2018 3:35:00 AM
lol Art we used to leave a glass of sherry too:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/12/2018 4:20:00 PM
Very cute, Jan.
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Date: 12/12/2018 5:33:00 PM
Thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/12/2018 3:33:00 PM
Nice one Jan, I believe I got POTD cuz of your popularity, lol, Love you xo
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Date: 12/12/2018 4:15:00 PM
You deserved it on your merits Pixie Dust I was so thrilled for you:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/12/2018 3:03:00 PM
Great one Jan. I enjoyed this :)
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Date: 12/12/2018 3:05:00 PM
thanks Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/12/2018 3:03:00 PM
Jan, those are some sweet Ku's~
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Date: 12/12/2018 3:05:00 PM
thanks Constance:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/12/2018 2:06:00 PM
- So sweet, Jan :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/12/2018 2:35:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise its a magical time for many children:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/12/2018 1:13:00 PM
I guess mince pies are the preferred treat in your neck of the woods - have a happy Christmas, Jan!
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Date: 12/12/2018 1:15:00 PM
As a child we used to leave mince pies, a carrot for Rudolph and a glass of sherry lol:-) hugs Jan xx

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