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Christmas Mourning

As December winds swirled the snow in drifts outside Lisa covered Mama, held her hand as she cried “It’s my last Christmas, I know it in my heart, dear Send my prayers to God; deliver them with my tears” “Hush, Mama, you can’t die; Tommy needs you so And his tour of duty still has six months to go” Mama fell asleep, Lisa bowed her head in prayer Adding her own tears, she asked that Tommy be there “Please let my brother see Mama just one more time When her eyes open, may it be her son she finds” Tears fell on the floor as Lisa kept vigil Beside her cancer-stricken mother so fragile Awakening to see Tommy standing nearby In uniform he appeared; Lisa exhaled a sigh “God sent you home, I knew He would, our pleas were heard” Tommy stroked his sister’s hair, saying not one word ‘Twas then Lisa saw Mama standing behind him Aglow in heaven’s light were her mother and twin “How blessed we’ll be – together on this Christmas Day!” Lisa exclaimed, just before they faded away Confused, she saw her ashen mom so still in bed ‘Neath the door a telegram, Tommy too was dead And though there were tears in Lisa’s blue eyes so bright Her loved ones would spend Christmas together in God’s sight A smile came as candles flaming in the window grew Lisa realized one Christmas she’d be with them too Date: Written November 2010 Contest: Christmas Mourning Sponsor: PS Awtry

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Date: 12/21/2010 1:34:00 PM
OMG Carolyn this one made my heart cry so sad but yet so lovely.Congrats on your win.I hope it comes soon this staying in this house is makeing me crazy.Have a very Merry Christmas.With all my luv and thoughts your friend Teresa
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Date: 12/18/2010 7:35:00 PM
Many congratulations dear Carolyn for this terrific win. And thanks a heap for your comments.
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Date: 12/18/2010 3:23:00 PM
oooh, I loved that last two lines. I knew where you were going with this one and was glad you ended it that way. Congratulations. Can't believe I missed this one. LUv,Andrea
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Date: 12/17/2010 2:42:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deseved win!!! luv Michael
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Date: 12/17/2010 12:36:00 PM
Oh Caroline, This is amazing, I cried as I read your words. Congratulations on your win As Always, Shar
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Date: 12/17/2010 11:17:00 AM
very very touching....my kind of story....you are immensely talented....best wishes Syd
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Date: 12/16/2010 7:10:00 PM
Oh, Carolyn this is heart wrenching, beautifully paranormal! I'll say it was handed from above into the heart of love. It's another #1 if it's read in the same spirit that it was written. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/16/2010 4:41:00 PM
Great Narrative My dear Carolyn....are ya try'n ta make the tears jerk young lady ? Great write ! And by the by...that Epigram I wrote..# 4...whats up with the soup? It took 5 x's ta get that to say 'Epigram" ! Dang ! Third time that the "Soup" has done this to me....it truly demeans the write if'n ya ask me. Any who...thanks for reading and having fun with it ! LOL...much love, james
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Date: 12/14/2010 6:41:00 PM
Beautiful but sad poem. Thanks.
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Date: 12/14/2010 3:18:00 PM
Sad and brilliant piece Carolyn. You would be awesome at writing any style of story book. Good luck in Paula's contest with this GEM >> James :)e
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Date: 12/14/2010 7:29:00 AM
Kind of a Christmas miracle. Great fantasy narrative. Love, Dave
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Date: 12/14/2010 4:47:00 AM
Hi again Carolyn. I just read your beautiful narrative poem to my wife after my comment.It made her cry. A powerful piece..
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Date: 12/14/2010 4:37:00 AM
A wondrous narative write, emotionally sublime in context with an equally happy, sad turn in the end which contrues as a new beginning. I certainly would be proud of this one Carolyn!
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Date: 12/13/2010 11:37:00 PM
Carolyn, as I read this story, I get that goosebump feeling, as this kind of story is significant in life, it taps my emotions as this is a thoughtful sadness, tears will follow. A very fitting to the theme of the contest, good luck to you. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 12/13/2010 5:56:00 PM
excellent write for the soldiers!!
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Date: 12/13/2010 4:29:00 PM
My Father died on Christmas Eve 1983....I still cry at Christmas...But he is with My Lord Jesus Christ and safe ,happy and looking out for me.....God Bless and Merry Christmas...Love Taz
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Date: 12/13/2010 2:17:00 PM
This is heartwrenching for me, Carolyn, It's truly sad..I can't write one of these for the contest as I rather not go there again...just too sad..This will definitely be amongst the winners...Have a wonderful evening my dear friend. Love, Audrey
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Date: 12/13/2010 1:53:00 PM
Nice touchy and moving write on tears, with a nice episode, Carolyn,
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Date: 12/13/2010 1:53:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with this tear jerker..Reads like a winner..Your presence at my work lifted my spirit..Sara
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Date: 12/13/2010 12:47:00 PM
There's a sad story in this narrative, Carolyn, and you made me shed a few tears too. As you know, my brother is fighting overseas and my mom's health is not good right now. This poem reads like a "Hallmark" movie and I wish you good luck in the contest.
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Date: 12/13/2010 11:57:00 AM
yet another sparkling, sentimental work of art,caroline...all the way thorugh, this piercing narrative weaves of both angst and glory... i'm betting on this one for the contest! lots of luck! hugggs, nette
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