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My mom must have thrown her out along with all my wonderful troll dolls. Gosh, Mom, those things are valuable now on E-Bay. I'm glad mom didn't get to my record collection!

Christmas Day

My Christmas Baby Doll

Fast down the staircase, eight of us in all,
like Santa’s reindeer, fly to our big tree
the very second that our parents call
us from our bedrooms. Oh, the gifts we see!
The glitter of the tinsel can’t compare
to our excitement as we run to snatch
our presents up! Then we begin to tear
the wrapping off, and then at last I catch
a glimpse of my best present on the floor.
A box rectangular, it makes me guess
it has to be the gift I will adore.
Pink-cheeked and sweet, it’s Thumbelina! Yes!
I wind a knob. Her small head moves. How real
my baby is, and what great joy I feel!

Written Dec. 21, 2016 for The Christmas Day Contest of  Alexis Y.
See picture of the vintage 1964 doll above.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Roper Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 7:42 PM
I never had a doll growing up to frivolous Congratulations on your win :-) hugs Eve
Y. Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 9:58 PM
Hi Andrea, Congratulations on your first place win in my Christmas Day contest: -) Alexis
Dutta Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 9:17 PM
Congrats Andrea for your wonderful poem. My Mom did not preserve any of my favorite toys. But I still preserve favorites of my daughters though they might have forgotten.
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
December 27, 2016 at 7:25 AM
What a delightful gift. I can see why you picked her. She was just so cute! Good luck in the contest. Christmas day can be magical!
Austin Avatar
December 24, 2016 at 10:16 AM
Yes this is Christmas day. Funny, this is how I was going to greet you before I called up your poetry. Have a great holiday. Love, daver
B. Avatar
December 24, 2016 at 8:25 AM
Thumbelina was a doll I treasured as well. What a wonderful memory and poem. Andrea Happy Holidays and all the best for 2017.
Trifiatis Avatar
December 24, 2016 at 3:00 AM
Delightful memories of Christmas past dearest, Andrea. Hope all your Christmas to be forever joyful! Merry Christmas and good luck in the contest!
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 11:58 PM
What a sweet Christmas memory this is Andrea! I am sure your sonnet will do well in the contest. How lovely that you got to share your fun with such a large family. You are very blessed. I love the doll and used to collect them when I got much older and could afford some. Hugs, Connie : ) 7
Walker Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 9:59 PM
Lovely memory. I remember the smell of turkey in the house since Mom had been up since who knows when. The hard Christmas candies she always had out, decorating the tree and yes the hectic running down the stairs Christmas day to the gifts.
Vaso Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 9:04 PM
Oh this is brings back a flood of happy memories! Loved this Andrea! Merry Christmas! Hugs!
May Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 8:30 PM
Merry Christmas Andrea!... Wonderful write...hugs
Horne Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 1:52 PM
aww, lovely nostalgic write here, my friend
Burch Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 1:44 PM
Awww. Andy this is so sweet and evoking of Christmas pasts!! You reminded me of my 'tiny tears' doll and my raggedy ann... both of which met with unfortunate ends. Well done sweet friend!!! Big Hugggs. Merry Christmas!!! Deb
Lindley Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 1:11 PM
I LOVE THIS GEM , HAVE READ IT TWICE TO MY SON. A wonderful sonnet my friend... Our children are what makes Christmas time to joyous season it is! Superb sonnet-eering.. merry Christmas to you and yours!
Chircop Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 11:57 AM
What a feeling of childhood joy you transmitted..Oh those Christmas presents what joy..and now I feel so much happiness watching my daughter with excitement reflecting in her eyes.Wonderful poem sweet friend...Hugs.
Godwin Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 11:45 AM
I struggle to minimize the many life seasons of Xmas joy for her contest. I like your approach and I love knowing you loved baby dolls and trolls as much as I did. I hope you got a stroller, too - great fun, strollers. I could feel the moment of parental release to leave rooms and come see! The excitement of Andrea, the child, came through. I have so many joyous wishes for you at Christmas - and throughout the year. Love to you ... CayCay
Smith Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 10:51 AM
Sweet memories, Merry Christmas Andrea...
Turner Avatar
December 23, 2016 at 10:32 AM
Andrea, when I stop to think of how much old toys and things are worth these days, it makes me regret cleaning out my garage. i remember those Christmas mornings well. Good luck:)
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