Christmas Castaways

Christmas Castaways

My good friend Jerry’s unemployment had run out
I feared print journalism’s future was in doubt

But while we commiserated on Christmas Eve
A disheartening report was broadcast on TV

Local law enforcement had been busy that day
People found living in the woods had been cast away

These homeless families had set up tents on state land
And police had ordered these squatters to disband

How heartless it seemed that these souls should be tossed out
Poor folks who had nothing and learned to do without

We shut off the TV, couldn’t take it anymore
And headed for a café with joyful décor

Just twenty degrees as we drove down the highway
Where a sight neath a bridge caused far more dismay

A couple and their small child huddled together
Trying hard to stay warm in cold winter weather

Sad images of Bethlehem flashed through my mind
With no room at the inn for the savior of mankind

I looked at my friend and he returned my glance
We both felt this family needed a second chance

“Pull over,” he murmured, “we can’t just leave them here
These folks deserve to share in our holiday cheer”

So money that could have bought steak dinners for two
We used to buy hamburgers for our five-member crew

Some cash left over for a room at Motel Six
Not a real solution – a temporary fix

We returned Christmas Day; our church would take them in
But they had checked out; it was half past eleven

For long I’ve wondered what happened to this family
And what each Christmas holds for those who are needy 



*Recollection of Christmas, 2007, when the economy started to fail.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Callus Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 9:34 AM
Well done Carolyn on this merited podium finish! Very lovey and touching recollection. Congratulations! hugs // paul
Kayode Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 2:37 AM
What a beautiful package Carolyn,congrats on the win...huggs
Yvonne Avatar
January 9, 2015 at 8:39 PM
Excellent write and inspirational! Congratulations on your well deserved win.
Guzzi Avatar
January 9, 2015 at 8:00 PM
Sometimes I think its harder to accept charity than to give it. I hope you had a great Christmas with sis, my angel's still twinkling! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Haight Avatar
January 9, 2015 at 6:54 PM
A beautiful and touching poem, Carolyn. Congratulations on your win. Sandra
Deschler Avatar
January 9, 2015 at 6:35 PM
I also came from a poor background, so I know that this family was very grateful for the kindness you have shown them. Well done, Carolyn! Congrats on the win!
Allison Avatar
January 9, 2015 at 6:07 PM
so touching and sad many congrats on your win Carolyn:-) hugs jan xx
Guzzi Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 5:37 PM
Good hearts, a fine note worthy tale! Congrad's Light & Love
Gorelick Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 9:03 PM
LNC..I missed this first time around..what a story...Im so glad you stopped..that is the spirit of xmas.love you..hope your catching a BIG one. Bg congrats...
Neels Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 9:59 AM
Awesome to read this one again Carolyn ; ) congratulations on your win.. Hope you are having loads of fun.. Love Wilma
Song Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 8:18 AM
A real beauty... Your temporary fix for these folks touches me deeply. such big hearted folks. Congrats for winning with your caring poem and actions. Gwendolen
Roberts Avatar
May 28, 2011 at 7:44 AM
I had this pegged as a winner when I first read it, congrats on your win Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 3:30 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Dane, Carolyn
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 10:15 AM
Congratulations my dear friend, Carolyn, on your placement in my contest. As you know, I always judge them blind, without knowing who the authors are. So, when I come here to see who won, I get a wonderful surprise. It is so very nice to see you here among the winners. Thank you for supporting my contest...and for your patience in waiting for the results. Lovingly, Dane Ann
Brown Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 9:40 AM
Congratulatons on your win in the "Good Deeds" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
Long Avatar
May 27, 2011 at 6:16 AM
this was great congrats on you win my friend. cory
Brown Avatar
December 7, 2010 at 5:17 AM
Congratulations on your win Carolyn in Constance's "Saddest Christmas Ever"contest. Love,Carol
Null Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 9:37 PM
Such a sad story, in the true spirit of Christmas you provided for someone in need. I am sure they remember it as being a blessing. Congrats on this touching poem...Karla
Mannan Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 8:51 PM
So touching and sad. God help the needy and poor. many congratulations for this win.
Mehta Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 6:16 AM
Sorry, Carolyn, it's second place win
Mehta Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 6:14 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved third place win in the contest of Constance, Carolyn
Richards Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 5:48 PM
I'm so glad this was in the winner's list...where it belongs! A heartfelt Christmas story, that reads like a Hallmark movie....so very touching and sad. You have a big heart, Carolyn. And I thank you so kindly for your support in all my poetry as well. Congratulations on this lovely poem! Love, Carrie
La France Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 4:00 PM
Congratulations, Carolyn, on second place in my contest with this heartwarming story, I just loved it~~
K. Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 12:38 PM
This is very touching, Carolyn-- I am sure that family was truly grateful for the spirit of Christmas that you shared with them--I would like to believe that you gave them hope, you know? That there are still people who actually do help from their hearts-- kudos to you for that! Thanks so much for passing by my poems & for the congrats-- hugs nikko :)
Flach Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 12:05 PM
Wow, sad, yet beautiful. Some may read this and think you and your friend gave a terrific Christmas gift - I read it and think that you and your friend were gifted with the Christmas Spirit. It really is better to give than receive - although you may wonder what this family's future may hold, your gift of giving to them and then sharing it with us in wonderful rhyme, will benefit many more than just one family. You have inspired me to do more for others with this poem - thanks. Joe
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