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Chris' Senryu

together--- we make a pair....apart half of a whole

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/22/2010 4:52:00 PM

I missed this one when I was reading yours..Good expression here of the way marriage should be...Good luck in the contest if it hasn't been judged..I haven't been keeping up with them too much..Thanks for the comments..Mom

Constance La France

Date: 9/20/2010 4:12:00 PM

I just love this "half of a whole" ~~ thanks for commenting on my poetry~~

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/17/2010 8:39:00 PM

Romantic and to the point. Nice use of the form!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/16/2010 12:16:00 AM

Nice Senryu, Doris!

Diane Locksley

Date: 9/15/2010 10:47:00 AM

I'm still looking for my other "half," Doris. Please send instructions! Thanks, Diane

Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/15/2010 9:02:00 AM

Good luck with your well written entry in the contest, Doris!

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 9/15/2010 7:39:00 AM

Interesting, I'll have to tell my husband that. I enjoyed your wonderful Senyru. Good luck in the contest. Caryl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/15/2010 7:18:00 AM

Amazing, Doris, good luck in this contest,..p.d.

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/15/2010 6:59:00 AM

this is interesting,good luck in the contest. Harry