Chris

Surrounded by the glitz and frippery
the ribbons, bells and stars all meant to warm you,
on the mantelpiece, parading with the cards
the one that silently ' regrets to inform you'.
Muffled merriment, jaded joy 
from those who gently tiptoe round your loss,
they turn their heads to gaze up at the tree
as you turn yours to gaze down at the cross.
How many times a century ago
was this scene playing out from street to street,
as far away in muddied bloodied fields
the unknown sank beneath their comrade's feet?
You walked those trenches, too, not long ago,
at Ypres bowed our heads for the last post,
stood speechless at Tyne Cot in rows of stone,
raised a glass to those that fell and drank a toast.
Then only yesterday the word came through
you'd lost a bitter battle of your own,
this time the only casualty was you,
and so I raise this glass to you alone.
Sleep well, my friend
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Hamilton Avatar
April 18, 2015 at 5:13 AM
Viv excellent tribute congrats on being featured hugs 7
Wigley Avatar
April 18, 2015 at 7:57 AM
Thanks, Shadow, for popping by. If you ever get the chance to tour the battlefields of the Somme (especially during this Centeneray year) I recommend it. Sadly, my best friend accompanied me last year, but fell ill in December and passed away. I shall return next year to raise a glass. God bless, Viv x
Thirtyseven Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 2:25 PM
Wonderful tribute mate. How you seamlessly incorporate so much. Great stuff.
Wigley Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 11:30 PM
Thanks for the comment, Scott. Whether it be a close friend or the millions that I never knew, death diminishes us all. Regards, Viv
Grahamburglar Avatar
April 15, 2015 at 6:27 PM
This was brilliantly worded. I especially love the opening four lines. Excellent work, and thank you for sharing it.
Wigley Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 12:50 AM
Thank you for your comments, Preston, very kind of you. Often the case with verse of a personal nature, very little effort is required, and the right words materialize almost of their own volition. Regards, Viv
Gray Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 8:51 AM
Loved this piece Viv, of loss and remembrance, truly moving!.
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February 1, 2015 at 1:16 PM
Thank you, William. I wrote this in the early hours after learning of the death of my best friend of 42 years, who had accompanied me on a WWI battlefield tour of France and Belgium last August. A tribute to someone I knew and the millions I didn't, really.
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