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Chop wood, carry water before enlightenment as a mundane action conducted in stupor, thereby lacking traction. Chop wood, carry water, since body has it's need and so there's some vigour but we still feel empty, for love's not the trigger. Chop wood, carry water when light of clear truth dawns, mindful actions slower, knowing that God breathes us, thus He is the mover. Chop wood, carry water after enlightenment in wonderment childlike, as dance of life itself causes bliss beats to spike. 19-October-2022

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Date: 10/18/2022 9:05:00 PM
....nice one....'chop wood and carry water ...as dance of life itself'....a winter mirror is nearing.....carry the wood and chop the water........lolcofcof.....stan sand
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/18/2022 9:40:00 PM
:)
Date: 10/18/2022 7:04:00 PM
It has struck me of late how easy things have become... thanks for the validation :-)
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Becky Forbes
Date: 10/18/2022 7:30:00 PM
Indeed!
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Unseeking Seeker
Date: 10/18/2022 7:08:00 PM
Enjoy!

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