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She barted all lands, just for one little island, fertile is its soil.

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Marty Owens

Date: 3/12/2010 9:22:00 PM

Very nice Charma...enjoyed...Marty

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/12/2010 12:37:00 PM

And I bet she loves that island better than any other place in the world! It must be heaven! Very nice, Charma, my friend. Smiles, Dane Ann

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/12/2010 11:11:00 AM

YOu said a lot in these few words, sweet Charma, and thanks so much about the sonnet. Luv ya, Andrea

James Fraser

Date: 3/12/2010 9:01:00 AM

Immense depth in the Senyru Charmaine, powerful little piece >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/12/2010 6:17:00 AM

Oh u say and write the most beautiful things dear girl ... I cannot even describe how this made me feel as I read it.. like a new flower springing up from love soil... thankxxx for another beautiful write and read.. just commented on blue brain..luv.. Linda-Marie... SOUP MAIL..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/12/2010 5:51:00 AM

Must agree with Karen, Charma. This is a very thought-provoking write that motivates the reader to appreciate their own "little island." Excellent senryu! Love, Carolyn