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Sienna eats chocolate for brunch, At dinner and always at lunch, With three bars a day, All that I can I say, She’s put on weight… that is the crunch She puts herself on a strict diet, No chocolate – (I don’t think I’ll try it) She gets in a bad mood, Cos she had to eat food, By Friday she’s causing a riot! Her long suffering hubby said, You’re really doing in my head, Stop daily Weetabix, Have a small chocolate fix, with Nutella spread on your bread To save from a costly divorce, Sienna goes on a short course, Of weight watchers meals, Her weight gain it heals, She no longer eats like a horse! I was challenged by an on line friend to write a poem on Chocolate 09/18/20

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Date: 9/28/2020 7:54:00 AM
LOL, great to see your muse is on overtime with the limericks : )
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Date: 9/20/2020 5:03:00 PM
G’day Jan … and I was led to believe that chocolate was a vegetable … by a chocoholic of course - another dose of wit to lift my spirits Jan - Lindsay
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Date: 9/21/2020 9:34:00 AM
ooh think i need 5 portions of choc a day then lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/19/2020 4:51:00 PM
Good chocolate humor
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Date: 9/20/2020 10:16:00 AM
Thanks Mark:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/19/2020 5:01:00 AM
It's a very brave person to challenge your wit and inventive pen to anything Jan. Not just one, but a box-full of delicious Limericks !
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Date: 9/20/2020 10:16:00 AM
To be honest Sean i needed her input as I'd had sad news and needed to write something fun:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/18/2020 10:54:00 PM
Lovely chocolaty write, Jan:)
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Date: 9/20/2020 10:15:00 AM
thanks jo:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/18/2020 6:52:00 PM
Awesome write, Jan. Loved it. God bless you always :)
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Date: 9/20/2020 10:14:00 AM
thanks Regina:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/18/2020 1:22:00 PM
Hahaha I need to know your friend's review on this poem.
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Date: 9/20/2020 10:14:00 AM
She loved it so much she sent it to her husband:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/18/2020 11:21:00 AM
We grow chocolate in Hawai'i, but now the bugs come to get it first! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 9/20/2020 10:14:00 AM
lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/18/2020 11:18:00 AM
Not familiar with Weetabix here in the US, but it sounds really yummy (*wink wink*) . Loved your tale, one many of us can relate to. My motto is: moderation in all things, including moderation!
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Date: 9/20/2020 10:13:00 AM
I love your motto:-) weetabix looks like formed small wood shavings and is probably as nutritious lol, mum has it with warmed milk and when it goes mushy it looks like baby cereal:-( hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/18/2020 11:06:00 AM
- She should visit Dr. Younan Nowzaradan in Houston ... chocolate for every meal .. quickly gets a few pounds :) - A little secret in the end: I love chocolate ... but, do not tell anyone, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/20/2020 10:07:00 AM
Of course i wont tell anyone cos its my secret too:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/18/2020 8:51:00 AM
Mmm choclate, everyones downfall, have tried those weight watchers choc bars, thumbs down, Cadburys dairy milk anyday. Tom
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Date: 9/20/2020 10:07:00 AM
ooh i love turkish delight though:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/18/2020 11:08:00 AM
- Turkish chocolate is not good, too sweet :)
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Date: 9/18/2020 9:21:00 AM
have you tried the reduced sugar dairy milk - I think i prefer it to the original - got it reduced in price in the co -op lol great with hubby being diabetic:-) he still likes a treat:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/18/2020 8:41:00 AM
Hahahah my favorite food and I never gain an once, (truth!) well besides cookies and chips, so glad I am single without a larger wife, lol
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Date: 9/18/2020 9:20:00 AM
aww Bobby May you are a sweetheart:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 9/18/2020 8:22:00 AM
Very nice, JAn. One should never deny oneself chocolate. I probably have at least half an ounce a day of it. But the healthy dark kind. I DO love to savor an entire box. That happens only at Xmas time!!
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Date: 9/18/2020 9:13:00 AM
I know friends who have been on diets and denied a treat and then put back the weight they have lost plus a little more... have never been on a diet guess i am lucky:-) hugs jan xx

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