China God

*****Erectus, from the moment 
that he looked into the dome above
and knew he could not stand to be alone,
raised up "El" in his own image,
let him step between our weakness 
and our fears, then prostrate,  
groped in vain to reach a new reality
that seeks escape as its device
that glories in the niceties 
of elegance, of twists and swirls, 
baroque enhancing of an argument
now creased with time.

And vanity it is, all second sight,
all flowers in the night
that we had breathed before and loved,
and fell upon with tears.
It is these pinpoint moments
flashing at us, that contain
a universe, a glory
to sustain a life, an era
made of breath, a now
that may not fade away.

The hunger does it...the holy lust
that drives us to ascension
in the mist of morning,
some kind of rapture
we were called to,
back within the cave. 
         ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Ludden Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 9:16 AM
Thank you! The point is, we created God because of basic instinct...we needed him.
Lander Avatar
October 6, 2012 at 8:54 AM
this read like a ellipitcal write, with a hidden message, ,,the hunger does it .. the holy lust pondering thoughts thank you for sharing with me.. one love annie la
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