Children, Happy and Contented

Story telling time Content in their small world Watch them fall asleep

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/29/2013 11:17:00 AM

Good day James, Congratulations, :)on having your poem Featured on the Soups Home Page.... enjoy your coming week. always~ LINDA

Daver Austin

Date: 9/28/2013 9:07:00 AM

Getting them out of this screwed up world, eh. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 7/19/2009 11:19:00 PM

Awesome write about awesome beings!

Date: 7/18/2009 7:26:00 PM

Capturing such a peaceful scene in just three lines. The alliteration works well. Nice one! Karen

Jared Pickett

Date: 7/18/2009 7:18:00 PM

My favorite style written perfectly.... Good job......:JP)

Kristy De La Keur Scoville

Date: 7/18/2009 4:50:00 PM

soup mail Highlander...and story time is the best to give kids...i miss it

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/18/2009 4:50:00 PM

Reading those books puts them out evey time. They love as I love this Senryu. Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/18/2009 4:12:00 PM

Sounds like you have soe wonderful memories of raising your children, James. "Storytelling" was a nightly activity in my family home, but I never did fall asleep listening to the tales. Too engrossed in the plots and characters. Lovely senryu! Love, Carolyn