Children, Happy and Contented

Story telling time Content in their small world Watch them fall asleep
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 29, 2013 at 11:17 AM
Good day James, Congratulations, :)on having your poem Featured on the Soups Home Page.... enjoy your coming week. always~ LINDA
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September 28, 2013 at 9:07 AM
Getting them out of this screwed up world, eh. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
Brown Avatar
July 19, 2009 at 11:19 PM
Awesome write about awesome beings!
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July 18, 2009 at 7:26 PM
Capturing such a peaceful scene in just three lines. The alliteration works well. Nice one! Karen
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July 18, 2009 at 7:18 PM
My favorite style written perfectly.... Good job......:JP)
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July 18, 2009 at 4:50 PM
Reading those books puts them out evey time. They love as I love this Senryu. Sara
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July 18, 2009 at 4:50 PM
soup mail Highlander...and story time is the best to give kids...i miss it
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July 18, 2009 at 4:12 PM
Sounds like you have soe wonderful memories of raising your children, James. "Storytelling" was a nightly activity in my family home, but I never did fall asleep listening to the tales. Too engrossed in the plots and characters. Lovely senryu! Love, Carolyn
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