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When I was a little girl unaware of life and evil, Father would take me to the park with him; I loved the ducks and how sweetly they floated there, Father would sit on a park bench watching me feeding ducks. The ducks would come to me without hesitation, They knew nothing about corruption or evil; Ugliness in the world did not exist in this peaceful park, It was so soothing beneath the trees to just talk and sit. Oh, to go back to those days of the innocent child, Who would ask father question after question; Under those swaying leaves with pretty ducks drifting by, He talked to me about life and nature on that park bench. I went back to the park recently to visit that old bench, It still remains as I recall where me and father sat; Lingering there I watched the ducks drifting and remembered, A gentle breeze touched my hair and I imagined it was father. Sitting on the park bench with me . . . . ___________________________ February 13, 2016 (Edit) Poetry/Verse/Childhood Memory Copyright Protected, ID 16-1218-666-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted into the contest, Strand Choice 3 sponsor, Brian Strand Third Place

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Date: 1/22/2020 2:23:00 PM
such a thoughtful write here, my friend. i hope you & that cute kitty are doing well xx
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Constance La France
Date: 1/22/2020 7:52:00 PM
Jack, thanks for visiting my poetry today and for the comment, me and Snuggles are doing great thanks _Constance
Date: 1/22/2020 1:11:00 PM
Very sweet and touching words. You should always try to go back to those happy places they make life so much more enjoyable. I like how you took your father back there with you without even meaning to.
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Date: 1/22/2020 7:55:00 PM
James, thank you for visiting my poem and for your wonderful comment, that was so beautiful what you wrote "I like how you took your father back there with you without even meaning to"_ Constance

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