Childhood Games and Paper Planes

I watched in awe as he sailed them aloft.
When they crash landed, I never scoffed
nor did I laugh when they hit the ceilings
for that would've hurt the pilot's feelings.

Stacks of paper were a staple at our home.
Not far from my brother's side did I roam.
Just two years older, but I worshipped him
Sometimes a plane's body, he'd let me trim.

How patient he was to teach me things
about throwing planes and adjusting wings.
So many hours I spent watching him fold,
and telling me, "I'll do this when I'm old."

He gave in when I asked if I could color one,
he rolled his eyes but when it was done
he let me do another, and when I chose pink
he made a silly face, then gave me a wink.

Those childhood games in my memory remains
though I was awful at launching paper planes.
Not for very long were they gracefully air born,
but brother never complained, nor did he scorn.

He told me so often, "It's in the flick of your wrist."
Mine did nose dives, spinning with a tornadic twist.
I tried to relaunch the bent ones to save on paper, 
but couldn't master the art of folding the right taper.

I'd ask, "Where are you flying your plane today?"
He would always say, "Somewhere very far away."
I wonder if paper airplanes are still being made.
May the joy of making this simple toy never fade.



August 27, 2022
Paper Airplanes Contest
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Krutsinger Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 8:27 PM
"I wonder if paper airplanes are still being made."- wonder no more. I have a 9 year old child who comes in to see me daily and folds airplanes and boomerangs in an expert way each time
Logan Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 5:52 AM
aww that's great! Thanks, Caren.
Koplin Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 1:34 PM
Awesome! I still make them once in a while.
Logan Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 5:52 AM
LOL
Koplin Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 2:31 PM
Both
Logan Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 2:23 PM
aww, sounds like fun. Do you throw them at your wife or the dogs? lol
Watt Avatar
August 29, 2022 at 10:40 AM
Jenna, you have so seamlessly folded two narratives into one tale: the fun of flying paper airplanes and the love and admiration you have for your brother. Very touching, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this today ~ John
Logan Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 2:23 PM
I always am so appreciative of your remarks and your visits. Thank you so much, John.
Lawrence Avatar
August 28, 2022 at 7:49 AM
Jenna, I love this !! It brought back so many memories of my childhood and making paper planes with my Dad and sisters . There is definitely an art to it . This is a great story and charming in its descriptions. Hugs to you , Susan :)
Logan Avatar
August 28, 2022 at 9:38 AM
I'm so glad it brought you such fine memories. Thanks so much for your thoughts, Susan.
Cunningham Avatar
August 28, 2022 at 4:38 AM
I made quite a few in my childhood days Jenna, a heartwarming story. Hope you're well. Tom
Logan Avatar
August 28, 2022 at 9:37 AM
I am quite well, Tom. Are you home or checking in? In either case, your new saga of Soup Creek is another fantastic episode. Can't wait to find out who the 3 strangers are and if they're lookin' for trouble.
Fowler Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 3:47 PM
I'm with ya on this one Jenna. Followed by big brother around like he was the only living person alive (is that redundant LOL). This is a great poem! All best for the contest! Linda
Logan Avatar
August 28, 2022 at 9:36 AM
We shared that love for our brothers with great memories. Thanks, Linda.
Sambourne Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 12:09 PM
Your intriguing narrative poem brings back grand memories, Jenna. So many of us tried our hands at making paper planes glide as far as possible. My childhood efforts were rather insubstantial. Perhaps the paper plane has metaphorical significance? But you wisely let your readers discover that for themselves. Such a fine write! Best wishes, Brian
Logan Avatar
August 28, 2022 at 9:35 AM
I hope those memories were good ones, Brian. Thank you for grasping what was left untold, and I appreciate your well wishes.
Hankins Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 8:13 AM
A perfect story written perfectly, my friend. If I recall correctly, we used to strategically place a paper clip on the underside which helped it fly better. I was never very good at it, but apparently your brother was an excellent pilot. He had a good co-pilot, too.
Logan Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 9:01 AM
I thought he was awesome no matter what he did, Milt, but the best I had to offer him was to be his gofor. Thanks for commenting.
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