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Childhood Games and Paper Planes

I watched in awe as he sailed them aloft. When they crash landed, I never scoffed nor did I laugh when they hit the ceilings for that would've hurt the pilot's feelings. Stacks of paper were a staple at our home. Not far from my brother's side did I roam. Just two years older, but I worshipped him Sometimes a plane's body, he'd let me trim. How patient he was to teach me things about throwing planes and adjusting wings. So many hours I spent watching him fold, and telling me, "I'll do this when I'm old." He gave in when I asked if I could color one, he rolled his eyes but when it was done he let me do another, and when I chose pink he made a silly face, then gave me a wink. Those childhood games in my memory remains though I was awful at launching paper planes. Not for very long were they gracefully air born, but brother never complained, nor did he scorn. He told me so often, "It's in the flick of your wrist." Mine did nose dives, spinning with a tornadic twist. I tried to relaunch the bent ones to save on paper, but couldn't master the art of folding the right taper. I'd ask, "Where are you flying your plane today?" He would always say, "Somewhere very far away." I wonder if paper airplanes are still being made. May the joy of making this simple toy never fade. August 27, 2022 Paper Airplanes Contest Sponsored by Jim Lawless

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Date: 9/3/2022 8:27:00 PM
"I wonder if paper airplanes are still being made."- wonder no more. I have a 9 year old child who comes in to see me daily and folds airplanes and boomerangs in an expert way each time
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/4/2022 5:52:00 AM
aww that's great! Thanks, Caren.
Date: 8/30/2022 1:34:00 PM
Awesome! I still make them once in a while.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 9/4/2022 5:52:00 AM
LOL
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Mark Koplin
Date: 8/30/2022 2:31:00 PM
Both
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/30/2022 2:23:00 PM
aww, sounds like fun. Do you throw them at your wife or the dogs? lol
Date: 8/29/2022 10:40:00 AM
Jenna, you have so seamlessly folded two narratives into one tale: the fun of flying paper airplanes and the love and admiration you have for your brother. Very touching, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this today ~ John
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/30/2022 2:23:00 PM
I always am so appreciative of your remarks and your visits. Thank you so much, John.
Date: 8/28/2022 7:49:00 AM
Jenna, I love this !! It brought back so many memories of my childhood and making paper planes with my Dad and sisters . There is definitely an art to it . This is a great story and charming in its descriptions. Hugs to you , Susan :)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/28/2022 9:38:00 AM
I'm so glad it brought you such fine memories. Thanks so much for your thoughts, Susan.
Date: 8/28/2022 4:38:00 AM
I made quite a few in my childhood days Jenna, a heartwarming story. Hope you're well. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/28/2022 9:37:00 AM
I am quite well, Tom. Are you home or checking in? In either case, your new saga of Soup Creek is another fantastic episode. Can't wait to find out who the 3 strangers are and if they're lookin' for trouble.
Date: 8/27/2022 3:47:00 PM
I'm with ya on this one Jenna. Followed by big brother around like he was the only living person alive (is that redundant LOL). This is a great poem! All best for the contest! Linda
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/28/2022 9:36:00 AM
We shared that love for our brothers with great memories. Thanks, Linda.
Date: 8/27/2022 12:09:00 PM
Your intriguing narrative poem brings back grand memories, Jenna. So many of us tried our hands at making paper planes glide as far as possible. My childhood efforts were rather insubstantial. Perhaps the paper plane has metaphorical significance? But you wisely let your readers discover that for themselves. Such a fine write! Best wishes, Brian
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/28/2022 9:35:00 AM
I hope those memories were good ones, Brian. Thank you for grasping what was left untold, and I appreciate your well wishes.
Date: 8/27/2022 8:13:00 AM
A perfect story written perfectly, my friend. If I recall correctly, we used to strategically place a paper clip on the underside which helped it fly better. I was never very good at it, but apparently your brother was an excellent pilot. He had a good co-pilot, too.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 8/27/2022 9:01:00 AM
I thought he was awesome no matter what he did, Milt, but the best I had to offer him was to be his gofor. Thanks for commenting.

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