Childhood Fantasies

i was six and you were nine
you would pack sunlight into a jar
tell me it was mine.

at night it lit my room.

when the stars were out
you'd throw stones to wake me up.

butterfly nets in hand
we'd catch stars from the sky 
save them in our pockets.

i'd hand you my water gun
you’d load one at a time
pull the trigger
and yell
"quick wish on a shooting star."

now twenty and more old
i still have the jars
i still own every wish
i uttered silently
on those moonlit eves.

it was you
in my dreams
in my smile

always kind.

i only had one wish
you and i
clad in the innocence
of those times,

of dreams and laughs
i only wished
it would never end,
and your sunshine
safe in my memories 
our childhood sealed in those jars.


Maurice Yvonne
Sponsor: gautami phookan
Contest Name:The Sweetest Touches of Verse
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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velasquez Avatar
March 9, 2026 at 3:48 PM
I love it
Dietrich Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 9:40 PM
oh also have to tell you that I read all the winners on that list that you recently got jilted on. Funny how the top two winners were not quite as good as the second place winners. Those were the amazing ones!! yours should have been on the list though. That was so strange.
Dietrich Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 9:38 PM
Belated congrats, and the one of mine that is like this one is called Jars, in my tanka forms. It is one of the few tanka poems I have written that I really felt was good. But it is sadder than your poem here.
Dietrich Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 9:36 PM
I am SO glad you got a win from her with this poem. WOW. It's amazing. This is the kind of poem from you the I really love, nostalgic and sweet. it reminds me somewhat of a poem of mine. I will go get the title to tell you. FAVE.
Deschler Avatar
October 17, 2014 at 1:26 AM
These are beautiful memories that you've shared with us, Maurice. I really enjoyed this heartfelt and tender write. Congrats on your win! Very nicely done!
Poteet Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 11:59 PM
a touching piece, speaks of close siblings or friends. well-done, Maurice. Congratulations.
Smith Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 3:02 PM
Wonderful Maurice...congrats
Allison Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 12:09 PM
wonderful memories Maurice many congrats on your win:-) hugs Janxxx
Mehta Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 12:03 PM
Calling interesting memories back, congrats on the win, Maurice
A   Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 11:03 AM
LOL... I will give you and L and the I... haha, Your reply has me cheering you on...LOL...Love Linda
A   Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 11:39 AM
Hi Maurice, I'm back here again... Thank you for being supportive when it comes to me.. Your newest FAN... LINDA
Yvonne Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 2:10 PM
thank you Linda, as for me i am not just a fan but a cheerleader too...give me an L...give me an I...
Walker  Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 11:00 PM
Beautiful reminiscence Maurice... Enjoyed. Verlena
Yvonne Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 12:38 AM
thanks. enjoying reading you. lots of love.
Guzzi Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 10:20 PM
wonderful memories and now you have it forever to pass down to family ... Light & Love
Yvonne Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 12:39 AM
how sweet. thank you. lots of love.
A   Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 9:39 PM
WOW, Maurice, now that is truly something, and sweet. I never had a childhood like this. For them wishes, seem to be the best part of the fantasy.... A wonderful read... Linda
Yvonne Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 12:42 AM
well if we can travel back in time, we could give it a shot. heeheeheehee. i am so mischievous. lots of love.
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