Childhood Dreams For Contest

Reigate Juniors, late July, in nineteen sixty nine
Miss Leggett crossed the room and slowly pulled down all the blinds
as one by one the summer's morning settled into gloom
the five of us sat quietly in the television room.
Power on, wait for it warming up, and then channel select
a picture slowly forming, didn't know what to expect
grainy image, took a moment for our eyes to work it out
and see just what the world outside was now talking about.
Shimmering in UHF scan lines at six-two-five
we watched a major milestone being broadcast to us, live.
Ghostly figure, hesitant, and slow, considered pace
was out taking his morning stroll far off in outer space.
Every action analysed, each purpose predefined
environmental figures taken, soil samples mined.
No more science fiction, science fact, this vision real,
our wondering just how for that one man the scene must feel.
His colleague now with camera, the U.S flag he plants,
a speech so calm, if it was me, I'd one sixth-g a dance.
Outside at lunch in the playground we talked of how we planned
in Tranquillitatis to be where Armstrong stood and scanned.
To boldly split infinitives and bravely seek new worlds
(but since this was a 'boys own' job, we'd have to leave the girls)
Fast forward now by fifty years, the space race still not won,
the kitchen sink is blocked and all the laundry's still not done.
The body aches and creaks and groans, old age coming too soon,
but inner child looks up some nights, and still salutes the moon.

August 13th 2015, for contest 'Childhood dreams', sponsored by Silent One
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lindley Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 7:42 AM
Had me wrapped in from the first verse. In 1969, my dad had just died and I watched that and thought if they can go to the moon why couldn't they save his life?? Great poem my friend. A7 Closing verses made me smile..
Wigley Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 9:08 AM
The eternal question, Robert- why not cure, feed, water and house first? The moon wasn't going anywhere. Roll on Revelation 21:4, I say. Regards to you and yours, Viv
Walter Skyy Avatar
August 28, 2015 at 8:57 PM
Congrats on a well deserved win!!! Skyy
Wigley Avatar
August 28, 2015 at 10:54 PM
Thanks, Skyy, appreciate you dropping by. Viv x
Kimathi Avatar
August 28, 2015 at 11:47 AM
A wonderfully wriiten piece Viv! Congratulations to your win! ;-)
Wigley Avatar
August 28, 2015 at 10:54 PM
Cheers, Teddy, thanks for the visit. Regards, Viv
Hunjeri Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 7:36 PM
Wow Viv, i love this dream. Its still so pure and innocent. I love how u told it. Congrats on your win #7
Nunez Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 8:35 PM
An enjoyable narrative in rhyme. This reader can certainly identify with the thoughts within an unrealized dream in the poignancy of your write, Viv. No wonder this got a top place. Congrats and hugs!
Wigley Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 9:11 PM
Thanks, Kim, apologies for my absence recently, had a lot going on. Still love you, though.. Viv x
Guzzi Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 7:20 PM
Nice win, keep them coming! Light & Love
Wigley Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 8:22 PM
Thanks, Debbie, very kind. The advantage of ageing- more memories to draw from :) Viv x
Inman Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 7:44 AM
I knew it would do well Viv. Once again, great poem!
Wigley Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 8:23 PM
Thanks James, now can you give me next weekend's winning lotto numbers please? Regards, Viv
Cwiak Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 3:05 AM
Kudos on this winner. This puts both the dream and reality together in a way I would not of thought of doing.
Wigley Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 4:42 AM
Thanks for the positive comment, Dan, appreciate it. I was just fortunate it all came together. Regards, Viv
A. Sharma Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 10:39 PM
Congrats on ur superb win Viv with this awesome narrative!
Wigley Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 12:43 AM
Thanks Dr Upma, very kind. Nice of you to drop by. Viv x
Breidenthal Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 8:23 PM
Beautiful narrative here!!! Congrats on your super win! I absolutely love those last two lines... very fascinating... Always, Laura
Wigley Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 12:45 AM
Thanks, Laura. Incredible to think that the computer in your microwave oven is more powerful than the one that took three men to the moon and back. Viv x
Lindley Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 7:47 PM
Brilliant poem my friend, every verse of it...a7..
Wigley Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 12:46 AM
Thanks, Robert. Nowadays, my 'one small step for Man' is the one out of bed to go to the bathroom..... Blessings to you and yours, Viv
A  Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 1:23 PM
Viv, Congratulations on your "Childhood dreams win." SKAT
Wigley Avatar
August 26, 2015 at 12:47 AM
Thanks, Skat, long memories can produce nice poems, as shown woith the submissions for this contest. Viv x
Allison Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 10:01 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Mr Viv:-) hugs Jan xx
Allison Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 12:02 PM
Am doing aok thanks - still struggling with this chest infection but hey ho I am still waking up every morning so it has to be all good lol:-) hugs jan xx
Wigley Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 11:57 AM
Thanks, Jan, hope you're well x
Haight Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 8:35 AM
Viv, your poem gave me chills. I love the way you wrote your poem. It made me recall that wondrous day, sitting on the edge of our bed with our 10-year old son and two younger daughters watching this amazing event. My heartfelt congratulations on your First Place win! Sandra
Wigley Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 8:45 AM
Thank you Sandra, very kind. One of those vivid events that many can recall in great detail. Another one was Concorde's maiden flight- we sat watching a black and white portable in the kitchen, and my Dad saying 'it will never get off the ground'. We had corned beef fritters for lunch. I always wondered why Concorde had frosted glass in the toilet- who is going to be watching you take a pee , 60,000 feet up? Viv x
Ward Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 7:45 AM
I am back to say well done for your poem's 1st place win. Viv! Julia, xx
Wigley Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 8:46 AM
Thanks, Julia, a great crop of entries now that I've had time to read them all. Viv x
Roper Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 7:43 AM
Back to congratulate you on your wining poem Hugs Eve
Wigley Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 8:46 AM
Thanks, Eve, nice to be in such good company, Viv x
May Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 7:33 AM
Well penned ....Congrats on the win
Wigley Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 8:47 AM
Cheers, Joseph, a great contest from Silent One that really drew on memory. Enjoyed it. Regards, Viv
Lamoureux Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 7:04 AM
What an exceptional piece of writing. I loved it from start to finish.
Wigley Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 7:10 AM
Thank you, Richard, I usually seem to get the hang of it when it incolves a strong, cherished memory. Makes me want to go and build a model rocket. Thanks for dropping by. Regards, Viv
Roberts Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 6:37 AM
Viv congratulations on a brilliant write , you so deserved first place.....Seren
Wigley Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 6:49 AM
Thanks, Seren, a bit of a shock, but pleasantly surprised, I've been out of the loop recently for family reasons, but thanks for commenting. Viv x
Zubair Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 12:09 PM
Dream keeps you young for a long time
Wigley Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 12:01 PM
yes, we must all keep dreaming. Thanks, samiha. Viv
Kamoonpuri Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 8:54 AM
Yay as a lunar-lover i salute the moon with yah and am reminded of the celebrated moon landing as well by yor awesome unique recollection of it all. I guess i wasnt born when it happend. Yor rhyme scheme was brilliant too. Kudos. Great to read frm u again.
Wigley Avatar
August 21, 2015 at 12:29 AM
Thanks for dropping by, I appreciate it. Regards, Viv
Ward Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 5:47 AM
An excellent poem, Viv. Julia, xx
Wigley Avatar
August 15, 2015 at 11:55 AM
Thanks, Julia, seems a lifetime ago. Viv x
Inman Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 10:33 PM
Such memories, and, Oh, the dreams. Like millions of other kids around the world, you and I will always share that moment (sappy, I know). Beautifully written, and as Bob Hope used to say, "Thanks for the memories," Viv. rjijr
Wigley Avatar
August 14, 2015 at 12:23 AM
LLAP, James. Regards, Viv
Allison Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 1:36 AM
wow what memories Mr Viv :-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Wigley Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 2:03 AM
Thanks Jan. There is an old joke related to the subject, but I cant post it here, will Soupmail you x
Manassian Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 1:26 AM
OH....this is so good, VIV. I really enjoyed it. "One small step for man"....and all that. Those last few lines really got to me. This aging thing isn't any fun....Good luck in the contest. I've missed your visits.
Manassian Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 2:08 AM
Oh.....hope all goes well....will be thinking of you. God bless
Wigley Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 2:02 AM
Thanks, Eileen, appreciate it. Sorry, I've been a bit tied up, good lady not too well, awaiting surgery in a few weeks, not a lot of spare time at present. Hugs, Viv x
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