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Bang! You’re dead I killed you Next game Rat-a-tat-tat Deep wound Amputate Lunch-time PB&J’s and milk Twinkies I’m tired of playing What should we do all afternoon

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Date: 3/13/2025 12:49:00 PM
oh boy ~ I often think about the concept of time in the various stages of life... funny how it is the same 24 hours for every person on earth and yet we all experience time so differently...
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Date: 3/11/2025 7:15:00 PM
This is cute. Well described about then :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/11/2025 7:19:00 PM
Thank you for your sweet words, Heidi! :) gw
Date: 3/11/2025 3:14:00 PM
Back then, it probably would be fishing, but today it will be a nap.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/11/2025 7:00:00 PM
Heh-heh. Me too. Sleep tight, Brother Jerry!!
Date: 3/11/2025 6:47:00 AM
LOL. Too bad adult life isnt so simple
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/11/2025 7:08:00 PM
Ah, but it is! I just close my eyes, take a nap, and the edge is off of everything. ~ Wheredidthedaygo?
Date: 3/10/2025 10:44:00 PM
A childs day you so nicely portrayed in your words those were the days Twinkies and HoHo's yummy.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/11/2025 7:14:00 PM
It can start to 'Snowball' on you, you know?! lol.

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