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Child Hellos

good-bye moving fades a child's hellos so much its pains still adult hold ... CayCay Jennings December 22, 2018

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Susan Ashley

Date: 1/6/2019 9:16:00 PM

Your monoku reflects in poignant beauty, pain long remembered. So much emotional depth in so few words.. well done! Congratulations on your wonderful win, Cay Cay. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 12/28/2018 4:53:00 PM

A very profound and insightful verse, CayCay! I knew it would be a winner when I first read it - congratulations! I'm glad you liked the IRS tax write. Best to you - Bob

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 12/26/2018 5:07:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this insightful piece!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/24/2018 5:02:00 AM

- Congratulations, CayCay :) - Merry Christmas ... enjoy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/23/2018 6:57:00 PM

We both know about moving so much and how it affects a child's life CayCay. Your Monoku reflects that wonderfully! I hope you are feeling much better dear friend. Congratulations on your win! Happy holidays! xxoo : )