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Child Hellos

frequent moving hurts a child's hellos so much the pains still adult hold

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Susan Ashley

January 6, 2019 at 9:16 PM

Your monoku reflects in poignant beauty, pain long remembered. So much emotional depth in so few words.. well done! Congratulations on your wonderful win, Cay Cay. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Robert L. Hinshaw

December 28, 2018 at 4:53 PM

A very profound and insightful verse, CayCay! I knew it would be a winner when I first read it - congratulations! I'm glad you liked the IRS tax write. Best to you - Bob

Michelle Faulkner

December 26, 2018 at 5:07 PM

Congratulations on your win with this insightful piece!

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 24, 2018 at 5:02 AM

- Congratulations, CayCay :) - Merry Christmas ... enjoy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong

December 23, 2018 at 6:57 PM

We both know about moving so much and how it affects a child's life CayCay. Your Monoku reflects that wonderfully! I hope you are feeling much better dear friend. Congratulations on your win! Happy holidays! xxoo : )