Chicago Winter Game

A cordless nailer with ice nail
Can quickly impale without fail
As soon as its felt
It begins to melt
Leaving police without a trail
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Krutsinger Avatar
February 17, 2022 at 1:56 PM
You remind me to not limit my own choices.
Laurie Avatar
February 14, 2022 at 7:12 PM
Hello Rico ... fire and ice leave few traces but victims and scratching heads - thanks again Rico - Lindsay
Wolf Avatar
February 9, 2022 at 8:20 PM
He got me with his 'cordless nailer,' Rico. ~ Lori Leadfoot
Faulkner Avatar
February 9, 2022 at 7:40 PM
The perfect murder weapon!
George Avatar
February 9, 2022 at 7:39 PM
If ice melts, how can the police follow his trail? Did he seriously hurt anyone?
Brown Avatar
February 9, 2022 at 3:45 PM
This kind of reminds me of "Christmas Vacation." When the icycle went through the window of Margo and Todd's Chester bedroom window, it destroyed their stero and broke the widow. They were puzzled about what caused it. I enjoyed your poem, Rico . Blessings ~ Debra
Bauer Avatar
February 9, 2022 at 12:25 PM
good one, rico! i'm glad i don't live there...
Cunningham Avatar
February 9, 2022 at 10:48 AM
They'd have to be quick or hope for a big freeze. Tom
Leffanta Avatar
February 9, 2022 at 11:21 AM
28-degrees F last night. Is that cold enough for you? Aloha!
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