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Chicago Winter Game

A cordless nailer with ice nail Can quickly impale without fail As soon as its felt It begins to melt Leaving police without a trail

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/17/2022 1:56:00 PM

You remind me to not limit my own choices.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 2/14/2022 7:12:00 PM

Hello Rico ... fire and ice leave few traces but victims and scratching heads - thanks again Rico - Lindsay

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/9/2022 8:20:00 PM

He got me with his 'cordless nailer,' Rico. ~ Lori Leadfoot

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 2/9/2022 7:40:00 PM

The perfect murder weapon!

Valsa George

Date: 2/9/2022 7:39:00 PM

If ice melts, how can the police follow his trail? Did he seriously hurt anyone?

Debra L Brown

Date: 2/9/2022 3:45:00 PM

This kind of reminds me of "Christmas Vacation." When the icycle went through the window of Margo and Todd's Chester bedroom window, it destroyed their stero and broke the widow. They were puzzled about what caused it. I enjoyed your poem, Rico . Blessings ~ Debra

Ilene Bauer

Date: 2/9/2022 12:25:00 PM

good one, rico! i'm glad i don't live there...

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/9/2022 10:48:00 AM

They'd have to be quick or hope for a big freeze. Tom

Rico Leffanta
Date: 2/9/2022 11:21:00 AM

28-degrees F last night. Is that cold enough for you? Aloha!