Chiaroscuro Twilight

tracing the edges of her hourglass 
curve, he imagines her eyes’ shadows
on oil and linseed…
wanting to be filled with neutral hues’ lines
as brushes smell of linoleum sky.

inside her navel is a garden and a river
waiting to be peeled, etched by strokes
washed in brown and grey waters
in a jar: he strokes milder through some 
verdant splendor of one Eve still in the night.

easel sweating hands on  bones’ canvas
gazing upon a display of creamy skin,
slowly being born from the marrow
an arrangement with chiaroscuro twilight…

           

but she’s just an image and he, a man.



            

For Brian's Choice 10
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Hawkens Avatar
May 31, 2020 at 3:40 AM
Congratulations on your multiple wins. A beautiful artful expression.
Brown Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 5:48 AM
Congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "Shadows and Lines" contest Nette. Love, Carol
Maverick Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 2:44 PM
A worthy win Nette, enjoyed the read and congratulations!
Devonshire Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 8:51 AM
Nette, Congratulations on your fine win in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn
Poet Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 7:49 AM
Just amazing!Congrats Nette on your big win.
Richards Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 7:22 AM
You always blow me away!! Wow....I would have put you number 1, but thank you for the kind comments! You are an amazing poet!
Dietrich Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 10:19 PM
a smorgasborg of colorful images. Congratulations to you ,my friend. What a great win for a great poem. Can't believe I missed it earlier!!
Bagnall Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 2:34 PM
Congrats, enjoyed the ride
Sweetheart Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 2:31 PM
Congrats Nette luv on your big second place win in shadows and lines contest.. with this lovely entry my friend.. enjoy top billing once more..
Brown Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 5:32 AM
Inspiration has filled the pages of poetry over this weekend here at PoetrySoup. I am happy to have been able to read your poetry here today Nette. Have a wonderful Sunday I will be back soon to read more. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 6:18 PM
Reads like a winner..Enjoyed this eve..Thanks for your kind review of my work..Sara
Foulk Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 4:05 PM
a well written and very creative piece of fine poetry.
Sweetheart Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 3:02 PM
well wow ..so immersed in your lines Nette luv.. a super piece of poetry .. amazing as u ..good luck in the contest my friend..oh..wow..
Falotico Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 1:00 PM
Now this is a show topper!!!!! best of luck with these winning words....btw I missed the contest with "The Sun I See" it closed when I went to enter it.. oh well... still had fun writing it... luv Michael
Poet Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 12:52 PM
Amazing...just amazing...Nette!
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