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Chiaroscuro Twilight

tracing the edges of her hourglass curve, he imagines her eyes’ shadows on oil and linseed… wanting to be filled with neutral hues’ lines as brushes smell of linoleum sky. inside her navel is a garden and a river waiting to be peeled, etched by strokes washed in brown and grey waters in a jar: he strokes milder through some verdant splendor of one Eve still in the night. easel sweating hands on bones’ canvas gazing upon a display of creamy skin, slowly being born from the marrow an arrangement with chiaroscuro twilight… but she’s just an image and he, a man. For Brian's Choice 10

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Date: 5/31/2020 3:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your multiple wins. A beautiful artful expression.
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Date: 6/27/2011 5:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ^Rick's "Shadows and Lines" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/26/2011 2:44:00 PM
A worthy win Nette, enjoyed the read and congratulations!
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Date: 6/23/2011 8:51:00 AM
Nette, Congratulations on your fine win in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/23/2011 7:49:00 AM
Just amazing!Congrats Nette on your big win.
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Date: 6/23/2011 7:22:00 AM
You always blow me away!! Wow....I would have put you number 1, but thank you for the kind comments! You are an amazing poet!
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Date: 6/22/2011 10:19:00 PM
a smorgasborg of colorful images. Congratulations to you ,my friend. What a great win for a great poem. Can't believe I missed it earlier!!
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Date: 6/22/2011 2:34:00 PM
Congrats, enjoyed the ride
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Date: 6/22/2011 2:31:00 PM
Congrats Nette luv on your big second place win in shadows and lines contest.. with this lovely entry my friend.. enjoy top billing once more..
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Date: 6/19/2011 5:32:00 AM
Inspiration has filled the pages of poetry over this weekend here at PoetrySoup. I am happy to have been able to read your poetry here today Nette. Have a wonderful Sunday I will be back soon to read more. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/18/2011 6:18:00 PM
Reads like a winner..Enjoyed this eve..Thanks for your kind review of my work..Sara
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Date: 6/18/2011 4:05:00 PM
a well written and very creative piece of fine poetry.
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Date: 6/18/2011 3:02:00 PM
well wow ..so immersed in your lines Nette luv.. a super piece of poetry .. amazing as u ..good luck in the contest my friend..oh..wow..
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Date: 6/18/2011 1:00:00 PM
Now this is a show topper!!!!! best of luck with these winning words....btw I missed the contest with "The Sun I See" it closed when I went to enter it.. oh well... still had fun writing it... luv Michael
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Date: 6/18/2011 12:52:00 PM
Amazing...just amazing...Nette!
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