cherries

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summer heat is up blue cherries ripening fast pick and eat or lose

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2024 9:56:00 AM

Hmmm there are blue ones? So interesting

thriveni c mysore

Date: 7/2/2024 11:01:00 PM

true. Congratulations dear poet.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/2/2024 4:36:00 PM

Jay, congratulations on your winning placement, a cute one.

Constance La France

Date: 6/27/2024 3:12:00 AM

Jay, nice, your haiku reminds me of picking wild berries with my mom as a child, Constance

Valsa George

Date: 6/26/2024 9:10:00 PM

Unless we pluck and eat, they will be gobbled by squirrels or birds. It often happens in our place. Beautiful haiku

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/25/2024 8:49:00 PM

Like how you wrote this!

Deb M

Date: 6/25/2024 1:42:00 PM

Hehe….love fresh cherries! Shame to lose….enjoyed this Jay! Debx