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Chemistry

I used to drink at all the pain I couldn't name while hoping to have some fun. Then I began to see that the drink I took, took Me away into a maze of insanity where my soul was silent as memories stirred up stark abuse ... oh what was the use, anyway? So, I just drank. Ten long years went by then I did espy upon an insidious genetic code going all the way back to a Scottish still. It did foretell the chemistry programmed within me meant alcohol would always need more. No such thing as "socialize" ... like you have a drink and "so shall I." No, that would never be for a drunk I would die but now, after many more years of sobriety there is never a doubt that I'm a blessed old sot to have each day without a drop.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/16/2009 1:27:00 PM
Oh, my heart goes out to those that are stil in this hall of shame called addiction. This is a very thoughtful, heartrending and passionate piece. It's a flashback on the past & a red light_ warning those still involved. Thanks for writing this to make the world a better place. Thanks for your comment on my poem. I wil send you a soupmail as a feedback on your comment. You are a role model. I realy appreciate you. Great you Sue! Adeleke
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Date: 5/18/2009 10:01:00 AM
Awesome poem! Congrats on your sobriety, if this was a narrative on personal experiences. I have lost family members from alcohol abuse and my close cousin is still flirting with the addiction. God bless you and you inspire others through your writing. Thanks for your comment on my poem. ~Des Juan
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Date: 5/13/2009 10:53:00 AM
Hey Sue, I sent you an e-card but I dont think you got it. Been thinking about you. Enjoy time with your son. Hugs and love, Shar xoxo
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Date: 5/3/2009 11:49:00 PM
Excellent.
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Date: 5/3/2009 1:58:00 PM
Wow Sue, this is magnificent. What you have overcome is a feat not many can do. You should be very proud, and shout it loud. You write it beautiful and make us proud too. YAY for YOU! With love, Shar
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Date: 5/2/2009 11:05:00 PM
You expressed very well with your writing. I don't know if you've encountered this phase but I guess we can change and light glitters in the solitude. Cheers to you. Great work! Kudos.
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Date: 5/2/2009 10:26:00 AM
The hearts of poets must find solace, and at some point and somewhere. seek to drown the clamouring... but like all great poetry, it will write of such and be a drunken debauchery.... but the next day.. awake.. having vented its spleen... and through thumping head gin its precious perch upon clarity. Open hearts and open souls bleed this way..with too much pain..and with too much love ... can find at time to drown... and awake refreshed with clearer eyes having seen the bottom of the well
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Date: 5/1/2009 8:01:00 PM
Congratulations not only for licking the addiction, but also for being able to share this inspiration verse that may help others to do the same. Excellent work, Sue!
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Date: 4/30/2009 4:16:00 PM
i am where you were. and every morning i say i'm going to stop but every evening like right now something is saying "come on let's go" and i'm on my way. pray for me. your friend john
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