Cheered By the Sun
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Awakened when the sun appears
In brittle light of early dawn
I put away my deepest fears,
nurtured when the shades are drawn
In brittle light of early dawn,
the beam of gold above my head,
provides a path to wander on
The new day swings upon a thread.
The beam of gold above my head,
bringing hope, which came along
The new day swings upon a thread.
A brighter view when night is gone
Bringing hope, that came along
when I was worried or dismayed
A brighter view when night is gone,
would take control, the feeling fades.
When I was worried or dismayed,
sleep deprived, and close to tears,
would take control, ...the feeling fades,
awakened when the sun appears
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Repeat After Me Contest: Sponsored by Rachael Firmin
3/17/15
Copyright © Carrie Richards | Year Posted 2015
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