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Chasing Life

rambling it all fierce is no game piercing the lips a brand on my name walk with a wedge stand up straight slouch all you want a stick up the notch teasing the lips live no regrets change yesterday forgetting the pass solid on the look watery eyes kill with the mind hear me, do not speak torch the need feed on the weak withdraw the mind blind out the truth be born to reborn faith lost faith found glory the name repent be saved be bad do good pick a flower strike a match doom to rebuilt love and live live and die cry and laugh laugh out loud By: Poet Destroyer

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Cynthia Jones

Date: 4/13/2015 1:24:00 PM

Linda, makes one think. A 7 from me. Well done. :O) Keep up with the great work. Keep on penning. Thank you so very much for sharing your wonderful and creative talents with us. We all truly appreciate it. *S* Cynthia

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 2/4/2014 2:12:00 PM

An interesting piece you have here. This is definitely called Life. Enjoyed!

Robin Davis

Date: 9/21/2013 10:59:00 PM

this poem is full of heart and emotion. you are trying to teach a lesson in a creative and though provoking way, nice job

Benjamin David

Date: 6/18/2013 2:54:00 AM

Words to live by! Well done!

Colleen Bono

Date: 5/18/2013 4:36:00 PM

I really like this one.Thank you for your comment.Your words DO mean alot to me.I am glad that I have been positive for you.You are a good person and friend.Don't forget to say your prayers. Friends,Colleen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/4/2013 11:44:00 PM

PD you are my last poet to see tonight. I got caught up and need to get to bed now. How are you doing? Is the restaurant getting lots of business? Luv, Andrea

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/14/2012 10:38:00 AM

just love this positivity

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 10/22/2010 2:39:00 AM

Brilliantly created a lovely Poem. Many of its lines are unique like your unique way of expression leaving the reader to get lost in the sketch of striking words created by you my friend. I have posted a new Kawaali in Poetry form and have posted a Blog in its support. Hope you would like it. Love and best wishes...Ravindra....Poet D

Anthony Beesley

Date: 7/11/2010 3:06:00 PM

THAT JUST ABOUT COVERS EVERYTHING AND SOMEHOW OR ANOTHER EVERYTHING IS CONNECTED THE LION NEEDS THE LAMB LIKE A SOUL NEEDS A SHEPHERD THE DRUG DEALER NEEDS THE JUNKIE AS BAD AS THE JUNKIE NEEDS THE DRUG DEALER EVERY COIN HAS 2 SIDES AND RIGHT HAS A WRONG AND EVERY WRONG HAS A RIGHT LIGHT CAN'T EXSIST WITHOUT DARKNESS AND DARKNESS CAN'T EXSIST WITHOUT LIGHT

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/7/2010 7:09:00 AM

a full full life...Light & Love

Isa Mahrie

Date: 6/15/2010 9:19:00 AM

Enjoyed my read ... thanks for the comment

Christy Solis

Date: 5/26/2010 10:00:00 AM

I liked the poem (: You have a way with words, and thanx for the comment (:

Jay Loveless

Date: 5/11/2010 9:01:00 AM

i like this, its a good write. nice work. -The Lost Poet

Lynette Chachere

Date: 5/8/2010 8:53:00 PM

sm reply.and have a good night!(:

Lynette Chachere

Date: 5/7/2010 5:18:00 PM

lol.walk with a wedge, and yet. .you still must stand tall and survive. this is interesting.in a way it's unique how you used different words to get you meaning across in your write. i like it. great work my poet friend.i must be honset though, i have issues with something in stanza 3, but its just with myself.i will read more now(: -Always&Forever Lynette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/7/2010 2:43:00 PM

Thankxxx for your comments today P.D. BBF and hope u have a great weekend planned... and hope u decide to enter my contest... ZANY ZOO... luv.. from the "Sweetheart"

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 5/6/2010 6:31:00 PM

Interesting rendition on life and yes there are such contradictions in life and when times are strained, how nice it is, to pick up a flower, find what inspires and bounce back and keep smiling. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your ongoing gracious comments. Best wishes, Caroline.

Brian Strand

Date: 5/6/2010 8:20:00 AM

Your sixth quatrain says it all PD,a great inner poem Rgds Brian

Jo Bien

Date: 5/4/2010 6:07:00 AM

good write..JB

Audrey Haick

Date: 5/3/2010 8:20:00 AM

If we couldn't laugh we'd all be dead, P.D.! This is terrific!! Goes to my favs. Thanks for sharing and thanks also for reading and leaving those comments for me...Peace, Audrey

Royal Trevino

Date: 5/2/2010 11:05:00 PM

sweet ending:)

Mitch White

Date: 5/2/2010 10:21:00 PM

Good job on this one- it agrees with my manic mind

Kim Hilliker

Date: 5/1/2010 4:52:00 PM

Nicely written. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 5/1/2010 5:08:00 AM

Wow, P.D., so nicely penned poem of yours! Enjoyed reading it! And thank you for your comments...Yes I do like whisky!.. Although Vodka means "Little Water" in Russian, I prefer Whisky as the spirit of life!...Have a great time...Gert

Skat A

Date: 4/30/2010 7:11:00 PM

P.D. THE L ) THIS IS AWESOME WHAT A LIFE YOU GOT HERE REMINDS ME OF SOMEONE I KNOW . GLAD YOU LAUGH AT LIFE. LOVE THE SOLID LOOK , AND KILL WITH THE MIND,, IRMA