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Charming Patterns

Charming patterns of pine needles Look like crests of waves from the ocean Swirled on the side of a road in synchronicity A perfect pattern to follow, left behind by the wind Delicate waves of needles, lead from sand to the pavement I observe as I walk, the woods turns into the beach And then back to the woods again I am tall as the pines, powerful as the surf Free in a forest, where waves crash on the ground But nature's silent creativity is found 9/27/21 Entry for Charming Patterns Poetry Contest. Sponsor: Julia Ward

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/30/2021 11:46:00 AM

You made the forest come alive!

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/30/2021 12:23:00 PM

Thank you so much Caren. I am happy to hear that :)

Edward Ibeh

Date: 9/28/2021 4:18:00 PM

Beautiful poem, Heidi:-) Enjoyed reading it. Best of luck in Julia's contest!

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/28/2021 4:53:00 PM

Thank you Edward! I appreciate your support :)

Ann Gilmour

Date: 9/28/2021 4:18:00 AM

wow Heidi your exquisite patterns have painted a perfect picture. Good luck in the contest my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/28/2021 6:46:00 AM

Thank you very much Ann. I appreciate your support :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/28/2021 2:23:00 AM

Wow, you certainly have woven into nature with this gem, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/28/2021 6:46:00 AM

Thank you very much Harry. I hope all is well :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/27/2021 12:01:00 PM

Hello Heidi, nature does have charming patterns showing everywhere. Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/27/2021 4:03:00 PM

Hello Heidi,youare welcome my friend. Hugs.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/27/2021 2:24:00 PM

Yes it does. Thank you Darlene. I hope you have a nice evening. Hugs :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/27/2021 11:27:00 AM

Nature does indeed create some charming patterns Heidi, we only have to look around us. Have a great week. Tom

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/27/2021 11:41:00 AM

Yes indeed Tom. Thank you. I hope you have a nice week too :)

L Milton Hankins

Date: 9/27/2021 9:52:00 AM

Yes!!!! So creative, Heidi. Such originality, too. I am having a terrible time coming up with something to write for this contest "charming patterns." Surely this one cannot be topped!!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/27/2021 10:58:00 AM

Thank you very much! I appreciate your support :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/27/2021 8:45:00 AM

Charming patterns indeed! Enjoyed this walk in nature in all its beauty through your words, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/27/2021 9:10:00 AM

Thank you Vijay. I am happy to hear you enjoyed it :)