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Flowers bloom in a chromatic aura of delight, discover the seamless sky's resplendent light. There is a radiant glory etched into the soul, evoking eerie charisma with flawless insight. Shimmering tinsel bathed in a satin dark roll, straying in a misty shroud of moonbeams toll. Alas, meadows sparkle with a celestial shower, radiating a sapphire color as a bursting pole. Charming, bright, dynamic, and full of power, a hypnotic smile as dazzling as a vivid flower. Something to lift the spirit is welcome, With charisma, even stars can empower. Charismatic people may view it or build some, There is an ace line betwixt icy and keen to come. At a bitter show, you whisper your sympathy, Is the man insane? He appears to be in bedlam. It's beguiling how we all have telepathy, I'm not my visceral gear, charisma, or apathy. Fake deeds, attire, tone, and words hide real fear, Proved that a fake me is swell to a fake dignity. The disparity and effect of charm and sheer, What happens if you have no links or peers? It may avow time to equate charm and loot, Even more, neither will be used as a frontier. Is anything you sense me that finds me a hoot? Your beauty to draw me out of my gloomy root? Still, I am both myself and you in this maelstrom, My grief and your charisma save that ripening fruit.
Written: February 03, 2023 1st place contest winner Writing Challenge - C Words - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 2/7/2023 3:52:00 PM
Sotto, a beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - C Words, well done, I love your image and music too, Constance
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Date: 2/6/2023 10:22:00 AM
Congratulation on your big win, Lasaad! I'll bet a poem this lovely has never before been written about charisma! I love your description: "shimmering tinsel bathed in a dark satin roll, straying in a misty shroud of sunbeams toll."
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Date: 2/6/2023 7:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. An amazing write with beautiful flowers. Have a blessed day..............
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Date: 2/6/2023 5:58:00 AM
Fabulous form with great imagery in your words Lasaad. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 2/5/2023 10:04:00 PM
Lovely images woven and pleated into a beautiful tapestry ! Love the expression- 'chromatic aura of delight'. Congratulations on your well deserved first place win, dear Lasaad !
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Date: 2/4/2023 6:10:00 AM
Well done my friend with this difficult to execute form-- with linked rhymes. Charming images throughout. Best to you, Lasaad.
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Date: 2/4/2023 2:02:00 AM
Lovely poetry Sotto, your words are not only incredible but also inspirational… Belle
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Date: 2/3/2023 11:33:00 PM
Incredibly beautiful. Your take on charisma is absolutely spot on with so much imagery. Best for a win.
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Date: 2/3/2023 6:19:00 PM
Wow, this poem, sure as lots of 'Charisma, Lasaad, just love the form, and the very essence of your words.
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